Hopefully My baby Malik is okay ...dirty wizards can't harm him anyway...heh
CONTINUE...its getting good man

I like this story so far. I hope you update it.

whooho! I LOVE this story already! Thus I hope you're still continuing? 'cause I love the pairing, you portraying of the characters and how the story slowly comes together... Though I don't like Atemu hiding things like that from Yugi and Yugi kinda tolerating it. Other than that, cool. Especially Malik/Ryou's relationship is worked out pretty well. And Isis is just herself - and I love it! You're doing a very good job with this, really!

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Ne, this is an original one! I like it, and I hope you update sooner or later!

This is great! I hope you update soon

This is such a good fic! Please update soon! It's nice and original too, as well as well-written.

OH! This is really well written. I haven't seen a HP/YGO xover this good since I read History of Magic and With a Wave of a Wand. You truly have my attention with this fic. Keep writing!

Umm, I noticed that you haven't uppdated this in a while. Why is that? I mean, if I'd written a story this good, I would've uppdated it as fast as humanly possible. You haven't abandoned it, have you?

This is such a great story! Please continue.

you porbably need to get Yugi and Atemu in to this soon. probably when bakura and Malik run out of information.

Though I am slightly dissapointed that you gave up 'Gifted', I really enjoyed this chapter. I hope that you will be able to find more time to work on your stories (particularally this one). This really is a great story, with so many ideas and little twists and turns...Please update soon ^_^

oh my! plz update soon!

Oh, lovely!^^ I can't wait to see what will happen next! Please hurry with more!

not sure if I reviewed this before or not, but I read it again and enjoyed it, so I thought I'd let you know. You have an eye for detail and complexity that makes this stand out amoung the recent wave of HP/YGO fics, and I hope to see more of it in the future. In response to your questions, the Fidelius charm was overcome a bit easilly, BUT, I think that was all to the good, because it really wasn't important to the plot and didn't deserve any more attention on it than that. In fact, you could probably have left it out and the vast majority of readers would just have assumed that all the wizards know more about Fidelius charms than us folks who have only read a few fiction books that mentioned them for a few paragraphs, and that's why it wasn't a problem for them. (Ok, so maybe one or two hard core folks would have commented, but seriously, the vast majority wouldn't even have noticed.)
Timing of events is equally fine. Don't worry about changing anything there.
No comments about characterization or plot, but if you want the second part of C&C, sometimes your sections seem to stop just a second too soon. It builds up tension but you never really get to FEEL the tension before the scene changes. You usually end with descriptive sentence followed by a short sentance. "He bit his lip." "What had she missed?" "Merlin he was pathetic..." etc. It's a very effective way of keeping up the tension, (and you use it well) but you might want to vary it with a different order of sentances at the end every now and then...Or not. Like I said, it's very effective, and I only noticed it was creating a repetitive emotional pattern the second time I read through it, and even then it wasn't till the last chapter. And maybe it's good. It keeps the mood from getting too heavy, and I know some people who really like stories who are written that way.
Anyhow, it's a great story, I just felt obligated to try to find something to suggest, since you kept asking for C&C at the end of the chapters. Seriously, don't change a thing unless you agree. It's great as is, and there's no reason to match my whims-I'm just a random person
Thanks for writing and sharing

wow! i love this story! its different!! ^^ i like the pairings too! who is Seto with tho? anyone? ohwell ^^ i cant wait for next update! ^^

ja matane!