Well, I must tell you, this is the most refreshing bit I've read so far. I love the way you've captured the essence of the characters in this and your other fics. You are one very talented writer...I'm not an expert, mind, but I read a lot...I hope its not too bold to say, but I love the way you write your sex scenes--they get me hot without being too blatant, steamy and tasteful, truly a gift. I gave more feedback on another email, but wasn't very specific...sorry.
Anyhow...I love the element thing..its inspired me to draw again! I do it for a living, so havn't done anything for myself in a long time. I don't post anything, but I'd happily share some of my fanart..if you're interested.

Hey, not too shabby. I liked how you had a solid basis for every combination of character/GF. I wouldn't have chosen all of the combinations you had, but you made them work really well.

Cool. It's original and all of the elements suit the characters perfectly. Just one little flaw - Quistis has blue eyes. Sorry I'm just a bit of perfectionist.

Nice work here. They match the elements perfectly. Keep it up!

Very original and creative. It's true; they all seem very suited to their own elements. Nice work.