Might go up to nc-17 or R later on in the chapters for some -cough- particular reasons...

*gasp* O what reasons? PLEASE TELL MEE!

- makes lil me feel real special

aww..ok very good story keep up the good work and the goodfulliness you have in yourself.

Very good - I just finished the Chobit anime not to long ago and I'm really enjoying your fic I hope you update soon!

Very good - I just finished the Chobit anime not to long ago and I'm really enjoying your fic I hope you update soon!

Freya: *does the Kirby victory dance*

Chii: *evilly glares at Freya* So YOU'RE so happy...

Airrider: *decides to hide the duct tape and soldering iron*

Hideki: Good call, Airrider.

Airrider: *is watching, with great difficulty, Chii bending over a tied-up Freya and menacing her with the soldering iron*

Chii: CHII? WHO PUT FREYA UP TO THIS?

Freya: :0 I don't know! HELP! HELP!

Airrider: *yelling over the racket* I think the fic is very great, I've always been a big fan of Freya!

Hideki: Then why don't you SAVE HER LIFE!

Airrider: OH! *runs in to break up the fight*

This chapter was great! I congagulate you on it haha. hope you had fun thinking of this consept. You ahve written it very well. though you might want ot recoman going back and fixing some gammar mistakes. They are little though not big. lol! You can come and read my stories the most popular one of mine is The Alice 19th sotry Disasrous love... haha laters.

Please Update Soon! I need to know what to happens next! . Please update son! Pretty, pretty, pretty please!

that was really good

o, please finish the next chapter soon...

hey,this is a really awsome fan fic. i love it! however, i'm not sure, but isn't the little personocom that calles hidiki "scary master" , well, isn't her name plum?i think you called her sumomo. i don't remember that name, but hey, i could be wrong. meh. keep it up! i'm officially addicted, so you better keep writing!
.. zaneeta

haha...so! KEEP UPDATING PLEASE

That's so messed of Freya. Knowing Chi would be in the darkness. I still spell Chi with 1 I. Too lazy to spell with 2 I's. Strange how I'm used to Eruda for Chi's real name. It's on the DVDs my brother bought. It kept saying Eruda instead of Elda and I like the name Eruda better. Well, please continue _

Well i'll look forward to reading the next chapter, this is really good.

Glad you liked the idea for Freya and Dragonfly. Just a crazy idea I had to have Feya find "Someone just for her". I hope Chii... Err... Elda remembers Hideki or atleast falls back in love with him!

OK, I'll go out and say that this is definetly one of the better Chobits Fanfics I've read. But there were a few things that caught my eye: One, is that 'tooken' is not a word and I would ot suggest using it in narration only in dialogue. Narrators generally don't have grammatical errors. Another (Correct me if I'm worng) but doesn't Freya die at the end? Because that was the impression I got. I don't know if you wrote this before you finished the series, but it's something to keep in mind. Good luck with the rest of the story!

Really intresting, I can't wait to see what you are going with the story.