keep writting good luck!

thats really good for a seven year old you could become a good author from starting so soon! keep going i wanna no the ending!

SEVEN? 0_o I couldn't write a thing when I was your age- I am very impressed! *claps*

? Um...I don't get where you are getting at.

What?

huh?

That was a nice story, right more to it, that was great, Could you read some of my stories and review them? I'd like that, I love Peter Pettigrew!

THIS IS _GREAT_ FOR A SEVEN-YEAR-OLD! Actually, you are probably 8 or 9 now, as you posted this in 2000, and it is '02 now (WELL, DUH KELLY!) I could NOT write a thing like this when I was 7. My stories were like this: Once upon a time there was a named Sue. She liked dogs. She got one and named it Max. THE END. So...BRAVO! *starts clapping very loudly, then stops when people start to stare, then blushes (I am very prone to doing that. I can go beet red)* Anyway, KEEP WRITING!

Dang! If you really are seven, then...*hoists you up onto shoulders and starts parading around town cheering your name* This is AWESOME for a seven year old. ;-) Wheee! *runs into a wall*

It was pretty good, especially considering you're a seven-year-old! There's only one bad thing I have to say: It was a little confusing in the middle. Other than that it was good. Please continue!

OMG!You SO have to finish it!

first of all,honey,this is a great start for a sven year-old.Keep writing.S.L.

umm... a bit short, what happens next?

seven? well, actually your probably eight now, but...god. eight? just...god! somethins not right here...

CUTE! Your only seven? How sweeet!