that was a really neat story ^^ loved it!

this is such a cool story so far! and this chapter was ho~t! ^o^b woo!

Great story, from beginning to end! I am extremly envious of your mad story telling skills ^_~! Thank you so much for being so very true to each character, thats harder to find than one would think and yet something everyone wants. Your stories have eased the pain of bad stories in the comics, thank you for that! (BTW, while I do enjoy these stories, I would love an update on Fallen Angels ^_~)

What a wonderful piece of work - truly, one of the best here at ff(dot)net. A new favourite of mine! Thank-you so much for this!

Amazing. You have to pay close attention to the story or you'll never know what's happening, and for me, i think that was the most enjoyable part. The ending could not have been better. How there was no happily ever after, you just know that it will all turn out...acceptable. I love it. Stories you can lose yourself in are wonderful, 'Taco Bell' kind of brings you back to reality and I would like to stay lost in the story. But thats the only thing I found that I didn't like.

that was great. I think when you said there would be slash, I got my hopes up for a bit more than was planned >_< but I really liked the story. ^_^

Wow! The story was wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

this was effing brilliant-- i love how you entwined his background and the indian flavor and feminism and-- oh, everything ^.^ i squeed when bobby got all protective and i like how you incorporated JP's friendship with annie, and how you made alex an ** but not overly so (ie: everyone's reasons and motivations made sense to them, therefore staying true to their characters). this was an excellent story! i cannot praise you enough for it ^.^

Absolute worship. I can fully see myself spending the rest of the day here, reading your fics and drinking tea. I love your characterisation and the detail you put in. This is how x-men should be written, not how half those 'official' books are.

Loving it so far. Generally I don't review until I've finished reading a fic (keep all the mad gushing in one neat comment), but I just wanted to nitpick for a seond. I don't know whether it's just a typo, but sometimes you miss out the commas around peoples' names when others are speaking to them. It's always been my personal pet peeve, that one, so perhaps I'm just being over sensitive to it.

Anyone, definitely loving it so far. You're great with characterisation. I'll just go keep reading now.

This is a really great fic. It was really well done. Great work! Jean-Paul rules!

This is a really great fic. It was really well done. Great work! Jean-Paul rules!

I'm agreeing with Warren for once, Taco Bell is the favorite of drunks, I should know I work the drive-thru. Actually got to finish reading this because it was slow at the one I work at tonight and I got sent home early. That part gave me a laugh.
I really enjoyed this piece. It was well thought-out and well-constructed. I have to say I enjoyed JP reliving his pastif only for thatit made me remember past readings. Was kinda hoping you'd use Kara at some point, but the story worked well without her.
I also really enjoyed the way you used the whole team, I didn't feel as if anyone was left out and that was good.
And I'll end on that note, as its 4am and I probably should try to get some sleep before work tomorrow. LL+P

I really love your attention to detail, it adds so much to the story. Everything is just so wow, I'm in awe. Really, just love this story.

I should be creeped out still, or upset for JP...instead I'm grinning like an idiot because you've obviously read AF. I can't wait to see what other moments you use.