WOW! You are AMAZING! That was just breath-taking. I don't think anything I could say in this review could really explain how I feel about this. And it wouldn't give you all the credit you deserve, or make you realize how much I truly loved this prologue. But anyways I really did love this, and am looking forward to an update. So please update soon! :)

Nice first chapter. Can't wait to see what you have planned for the rest of the story.

I really liked it. I think your descriptions helped us see from the characters eyes alot.
please keep going!

Great start so far. Can't wait for the next one. :0)

wonderful...Your a great writer! keep up!

Good start and a great point of view from both characters. Nathan's despair and pain is so obvious. I liked his comment about basketball being both his undoing and his salvation. It's a great idea and a complex story!

i liked the way you described their feelings. it's good. continue

I rarely review for any story unless it's one that, after I finish it, I felt the need to read over and over again. Yours was one of them.

Already the prologue is amazing; I can't wait to see how this story progressess. The characters' thoughts are exactly what I had imagined it to be as I was watching every new episode of OTH. I liked that you felt the need to delve deeper into Nathan/Haley's past and reasons for this and reasons for that but what you didn't do was explain the actual event that's the basis of this story: the last bedroom scene. I liked that you explained that whole sequence with just the simple words "And she did." and "And he did." That's what really drew me into the story.

Fantastic job on this! I hope you update soon, I'll be eagerly looking forward to it :D

You're a great writer; so much depth in this. It's great so far, I'd love to see where this heads off to. I can tell it's going to be great, so please update soon. I'll be adding this to my Favorites list, and I'll also be waiting patiently for the next chapter!

perfect text of how the characters were speaking in their point of views ... especially, at the end, when they explained their understanding for each other. well put. =)

This is so well-written. My only request is that future chapters have dialogue and action - I assume you are just setting up the story now. Anyway, keep up the great work.

that was so good!! Are you giong to cotinue?cuz u really really should