Poor Lilah. Hmm, all my reviews of your stuff start with "poor Lilah" or "poor Wes", I need to get some originality. Anyway, the writing style worked really well. I especially liked the last bit "He isn't sure what any of this is anymore and even though they haven't **-- Lilah is sleeping in his bed tonight, covered in bruises he can't see." It was very painful. I think they do have a relationship, and it could be something good for both of them. eheheh, I have now added you to my favourite author's list, so be proud!

I really like your stories. That being said, they are hard to review, because I can't help but feel that I shouldn't. I mean, they aren't exactly coming up daisies, but they are strangely compelling. I love them. The same sort of way that Wes loved Lilah I think. Which makes me insane. And you a genius.