ur really good! i hope u update! :D
jus one thing tho, zato's his master, n eddie is the evil shadow.

Are you gonna update?? Please say yes cause this is an interesting story.

Yay! TestamentxVenom! My favorite pairing (with ZappaxAxl coming in second). ^^ Good fic so far, but you oughta know: Zato is the man, Eddie is the monster. Otherwise, I hope you update soon! >w

Continue, or I'll hit you with my pool stick ;_;

I love the Venom/Testament-pairing, please update ! *kneels down* *begs*

^_^ wow a good start, i like where this is going so far X3

I A SECOND CHAPTER!
Yeah I like the pairing so much,please write more!

one thing : Eddie is the shadow & Zato the man
otherwise I like it.
Now there're a Testament/Ky & a Testament/Venom here ^^; Both are pairings I enjoy drawing, along with (my favorite one) Axl/Testament.
Keep on the good work ! It's an order lol

Hey there! I stumbled on your fic, and it looks to be an interesting pairing. I always thought Testament and Venom would be a cool couple to do, so I'm glad to see someone taking it on ^^.

That being said, I think your fic could use just a bit of polish to it. It's got some structures issues, from minor typos, to quote structure: whenever you change which person is speaking, it should be a new paragraph.

Other than that, I think you've got your Eddie and your Zato mixed up ^^;;. Zato's the person, Eddie's the beast. So it really should be "Your precious Zato no longer lives."

I hope you find these comments helpful ^^;;. I suggest, though, that you find yourself a beta who can help you keep chapters formatted correctly and catch typos.