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| ilexx 2007-01-15 ch 8,  | abuseOops! Good thing Andromeda is such a clever ship and can take care of herself. Maybe Dylan now gets to hire a crew of hot babes exclusively. And yet: somehow I don't think the others to really be such prudes. |
| MaryRose 2006-07-25 ch 5, | abuseNoticed you have no reviews for this last chapter and it might be because your formatting is all screwed up. It's just one big block of text. Maybe you could take it down and try resubmitting it again. Sometimes screws up formatting. |
| MaryRose 2004-04-25 ch 4, | abuseIf tyr hurts her I will kill the bastard. I swear to God I will. I guess an emtional reaction to a fic is a good review.:D |
| Callie-Cat 2004-04-13 ch 4, | abuseWOW! Natta, you can't leave it there! That's a torturing clif hanger! I need more! Great chapter, can't wait for more! |
| StarTraveler 2004-04-13 ch 4, | abuseI just read this fic and some of the last. Tyr needs his ** kicked good! I'm sorry but that's how I feel. |
| prin69 2004-04-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseoh. i absolutely love this chapter. it rox on so many levels. i can't wait to see what will happen next. the cliffhanger is killing me! how will tyr react? interesting when trance would not give vicci to tyr. and it was so so so sweet when harper said he was going to kill tyr. vicci is so cute! |
| Claripup 2004-04-12 ch 4, | abusePoor Beka... and poor Tyr... Great update... more soon... nice to see your still updating... you should do it more often tho! |
| chrmd red black rose 2004-04-06 ch 3, | abusevery awesome. Please update. Rose |
| Keri459 2004-03-11 ch 3, | abuseWOMAN! i am on my knees begging you to continue. PLEASE! i followed the prequel, and you have no right whatsoever to leave us all hanging here with chapter 3 ending like that. Litterally on my knees begging Please continue! |
| Ezjac 2004-03-01 ch 3, | abuseGreat story, I love Tyr/Beka stories. Just hope Tyr comes to his senses soon and starts being nicer and more understanding to Beka |
| Claripup 2004-02-26 ch 3, | abuseOMG - Tyr is so evil - It's not natural... etc - What a bastard! oh yeah - more please =^..^= |
| MaryRose 2004-02-26 ch 3, | abuseTyr is being such an **! Excuse my langauge but he did RAPE her. So maybe she MIGHT have SLIGHT problem having sex with him. Beka, you've already put up with more than you should. Leave the bastard! Um, rant over. More please. |
| Innogen 2004-02-22 ch 3, | abusePoor Beka. So Sad for her. Harper and Trance are cute together ;) Keep writing the good write! Innogen |
| Innogen 2004-02-10 ch 2, | abuseTime to update? Or is that big bad real life getting in the way? Just found your stories. Think they are great. Innogen |
| Dan 2003-12-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseGood so far. But, one question. Why is chapter 2 the same as chapter 1? |