 Origina1ity 2009-04-11 . chapter 1More! We Need More! |
 brightandsunny 2008-10-22 . chapter 1Wow, this is really a very interesting story, I wish you'd continue it, it's a shame to give it up... will you ever update it again? if not, could you please tell me what you planned to have happen in this story? |
 ms belle 2007-12-30 . chapter 1 I've really enjoyed your prologue. Looking forward to your next chapter. You know, when you think about it, Henry and James's actions really remind me of Voldemort's intollerence to anything not pure or perfect. While he kills and destroys, they just throw away. Sad, really. Thanks. |
 Ore no Naruto 2007-07-24 . chapter 1Wow.. this is a great story! It's a pity that you won't update this.. |
 Laetitia2712 2007-06-25 . chapter 1great story...update sooN! |
 Aqua Mage 2007-02-17 . chapter 1Wow, this looks like it's gonna be fantastic! Such a shame you seem to have given up. Is there any chance of at least posting the 10 page plan...? I'd really like to see where you were gonna go with this... |
 phoebe turner 2007-01-02 . chapter 1 great chapter! |
 ApocSM 2006-11-08 . chapter 1WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON! |
 Wolven Spirits 2006-10-03 . chapter 1Intriguing...extremely intriguing. I love it xD. Great idea! Very original. Wonderful writing style! Captivating and descriptive. And that's only the prologue. Characters seem very well thought out, and the story has extreme potential. Would love to read more, if you have any. Hope to read more ^^* |
 Heavens Sin 2006-08-24 . chapter 1Hey. Great story! I really like it, but could you not make the spaces between the paragraphs so long next time? Please don't make it H/G or H/Hr...? There's way too many out there... |
 Nicol 2006-06-17 . chapter 1 WOW , very very innovative.
Please try and continue this.
Please... |
 DieKittyDie 2006-05-27 . chapter 1please write more...please please |
 SwiftShadow 2006-03-05 . chapter 1 Please update soon! I'll be waiting for the nexst chapter! |
 B. M. Gray 2006-01-31 . chapter 1This could bite people in southerly locations. So even Padfoot and Mooney are willing to turn their backs on Lily and Harley?
This has potential. You've written it well and I look forward to seeing what you do with it. |
 risi 2006-01-21 . chapter 1This is a really great start to your story, but, uh, it's been over two years. Are you going to continue or is it just abandoned? If you're not interested anymore would you consider letting someone else finish it? |