You've got me choking on my tears. It's so good I can hardly breathe... Anyways, this is the first alias fic I've ever read and I'm afraid to go looking for more for fear of disappointment. I loved how every piece of the puzzle just fits together perfectly... I just loved it! Hope for more!

This is really a good story. I first read it about a year ago, but at the time wasn't in the habit of leaving reviews. But I remembered it the other day and searched through the stories looking for it again to give it another read. I enjoyed the plot very much--the way everything tied together--a smooth explanation of why Derevko gave up Sark so easily to the CIA.

I'm shocked to see there's only 6 reviews here--I can only hope there were originally more and they were wiped out in a freak computer glitch. This story really deserves more attention. It's original and well written and ties together nicely--things hard to find in fan fiction.

Nice idea. And smart writing. Hopeful to find another story of yours. I enjoyed it.

I'm bewildered and annoyed that you haven't received more reviews for this beautiful story. The only reason I can come up for it is that there are a lot of people out there who, like myself, find that commenting on something so apparently flawless is a daunting task - that one's writing is immediately reduced to gushings of inane praise upon any attempt of it. To pinpoint precisely what I loved about it is impossible; I would only end up quoting the entire thing back to you. Surely it is enough to just tell you what you must already know, that you are very, very good. On a par with the best. It is the few writers like yourself that give fanfiction.net some semblence of credibility.

This was one of the best and most enjoyable Alias stories I have read. I enjoyed that Sark was only Jack's child and not Irina's, as most stories I've seen tend to do the opposite. This story was heartbreaking and beautiful and simply wonderful.

Best Alias story I ever read. Period. Wonderfully complicated plot, very real, feeling characters, Sark and Jack were spot on. Also interesting: I usually like Irena and hate Lauren, but quite the reverse in this fic. Sort of a bittersweet ending, but as in life, things tend not to wrap up in a nice little bow. I am completely in awe of your talent. Enough said.

I just wanted to let you know that this story is awesome. I've read other stories by you that have been great, but this just blew them away.

Suffice it to say that this story stunned me... I wasn't expecting this. Any of it. It was fabulously original, well written, innovative, astounding. I loved every moment of it. There was no coddling, no pampering, no making any of the realism easier to swallow... I love you for that. It's as fabulous as anything you've ever come up with, if not better. That says a lot :) Now... I really must be off to write my paper. I'd love to leave you an anciently long review, but I'd wind up quoting most of the story ;)