this is awsome...please write more I love it

Hi, it's me AnimeFox :). I really like your fic, though I'm not into the mock scipt format. You're a good writer! I like! Keep it up! You're on my favorite authors list! (I just posted part 3! go see! go see!)

This was good ill keep an eye out for the sequel

so the fling is over?

good job, i love how ash is getting so suspicious!

good job, i love how you have 2 different dates going on at the same time!

good job, u hav potential!

good job, i like how u portrayed the characters!

aw how cute!

you are going way too in depth on "he's in love with you" use "he's so crushingon you" b/c love doesn't exist for 14 year old tv canadians

they don't talk like that all the time, plus they use correct english. good storyline though

I really like your story.please update soon.

nice story :)