classic that was some awsome writing the end was fantastic

great story, love the ending. I hate Will's father, how could he be so cruel, and to rape Jack!! I think it was really clever to have sex on thew deck so Bootstrap could see them
can't wait to read more of your stories

one hundred freakin percent priceless bbe too great just to great sigh nuthin like some angsty fluff way to go you were angsting like the sexy bastard you are woot.

Lovely writing style, good grammar, just the right amount of angst and sex. Please write more about this pair.

*sigh* such a great fic, so should have been how they did the movie! stupid disney

Still smiling Will shielded his eyes from the sun and looked at his father, "Shouldn't you be leaving?"

Oh my. I almost burst from holding in the laughter at this ending. Wonderful story.

omgomgomgomg! I LOVED THIS STORY! OMGOMGOMG! i have to say that is one of your best yet and such a good ending! it made me cry part of it. it was so good. i love your stories, this was great. :D

I luv this pairing and this is really well written. Last chapter had me all teary eyed.

Love this. This pairing is my new obssesion. Great job, continue soon.

Love how you have turned the story. I kept imagining all sorts of things, but not this. I do feel sorry for Will that he had such a horrible father, but am very glad that Jack really loves him.

How sweet. Poor Will, his dad is such a dick. Oh well, update soon.

Oh my god. This chapter was killer.. I got teary eyed and everything. Aw is all I could manage to say/think.

Muy bien, love.

please continue

oh my god, that was such a great chapter! the last paragraph was wonderful! please oh please write more soon!

yo thats cool, it freaked me out though, cause what if that really happened? what if that was how to all went down? you know, what if Bootstrap is really like that. that would be so freaky and...would change a lot. ahaha good story though update please!