cute. update soon or I will be very put out. Update
Queenbeth2

so good add more soon

i like it so far! its cute how jamie and landon have a kid

it's ok, but put a little more description in, we don't need to know every little talking detail. And start forming the plot...oh yeah, just watch out for those conventions too. But hey, it's not bad!

this is really good! update soon!

It's good! I have 1 question, are landon and jamie 21 or older?

hey umm i dont mean to b a lil um mean but there's too much talking...describe a little bit more...

Aww so sweet..Adding the litle boy in was a good idea.

'bout time you got this story posted. I liked it I hope you update soon.

queenbeth2

hey good story keep up the good work

it's a cute story..but u might wanna slow down and make a lil more detail..instead of skippin from one thing to the next so quickly. it's reakky a cute story..keep it up. update soon!..thanx