|Reviews for 4th of July|
| Queenbeth2 1/5/04 . chapter 2
cute. update soon or I will be very put out. Update
| coffeelover328 12/18/03 . chapter 1
so good add more soon
| jen 12/11/03 . chapter 1
i like it so far! its cute how jamie and landon have a kid
| lazydaisy 12/2/03 . chapter 1
it's ok, but put a little more description in, we don't need to know every little talking detail. And start forming the plot...oh yeah, just watch out for those conventions too. But hey, it's not bad!
| super sailor usagi 11/30/03 . chapter 1
this is really good! update soon!
| Duckygirl 11/25/03 . chapter 1
It's good! I have 1 question, are landon and jamie 21 or older?
| AlienatedFreak 11/24/03 . chapter 1
hey umm i dont mean to b a lil um mean but there's too much talking...describe a little bit more...
| xxbreathe0ut88xx 11/24/03 . chapter 1
Aww so sweet..Adding the litle boy in was a good idea.
| Queenbeth2 11/24/03 . chapter 1
'bout time you got this story posted. I liked it I hope you update soon.
| LandonNJamie4eva 11/24/03 . chapter 1
hey good story keep up the good work
| shanelover10 11/24/03 . chapter 1
it's a cute story..but u might wanna slow down and make a lil more detail..instead of skippin from one thing to the next so quickly. it's reakky a cute story..keep it up. update soon!..thanx