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| gem1990 2008-08-15 ch 1, | abuseWow. How sad but it gave hope. A wonderful combo. Great job. |
| Random Little People 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseYou know, some people can only write in one style or genre, and because you write humour so perfectly I never thought about you writing anything else. I don't know much about horse and, thankfully, I don't know too much about grief, but I still think this is a lovely story, not because I've read your other fics and loved them, so must love this one as well, but because the tone of this one fic is beautifully sad and so very Scott. |
| Little Fish in a Big Pond 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseImpressive. I kinda like how it was presented thru Scott's relationship with the horse. Very creative. The best part, though, was: That was the day the canter’s 1-2-3-1-2-3 became “She-chose-you-she-chose-you,” and, eventually, “Go-to-hell-Wol-ver-ine.” Incredible! :0) |
| FenixR 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. You made me cry. Thanks. |
| Genne 2007-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI never, EVER would have thought of something so simple but in depth. It was really beautiful... at times your heart would just break, especially at the sudden shifts of emotion. Just the ability to feel so much and yet not wanting to feel anything atr the same time was ..wow. to be brief:you did MARVELous! |
| Writingcritter 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abuseAw...That's so sweet. Pat yourself on the back. Your a good writer. I loved it. |
| theshadowcat 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was very sad and extremely well writen. |
| FBI Bones 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI love how you've brought the rhythm of the horses into the grief, it works so well and I adore horses, I find them so much easier to be around than people, they just seem like they understand you better than humans at times even if that does sound a little odd. I really like fiks where Scott is dealing with the loss of Jean (does that make me a sadist?) and this is one of my favs! well done! ~Red~ |
| Andrew Joshua Talon 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseWoah. I know little about horses, but a lot about grief. And you've put it across believably and perfectly in rythym (no pun intended). Good work! |
| jenskott 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseThis story has been very emotive. It's original seeing Scott healing his grief thanks to horses. You really have a very good grasp not only in drama but also in comedy. |
| renegade-452 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI loved this story. It was so powerful and emotional. Reading about Scott's thoughts and feelings was heartbreaking. The screen was blurry by the end of the story. I liked the description of the horses and the beats. I love the characterization of Scott. He's my favourite character and you portrayed him wonderfully (just like in the rest of your stories). You are such a talented writer. |
| Water-Soter 2006-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI never knew that someone who can write comedy so brilliantly she leaves any attempts quivering in her wake, would write equally powerfully more serious pathos. You are a Jack of all trades. This is heartachingly one of the best grieving Scott stories on the net. You are simply brilliant! |
| Wen1 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abusegreat this work with the rythm of the horses'moves and the sentences. It's sad but so like Scott should be great, it's in my favourites now JOTT FOREVER ! Wen |
| Meret 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is wonderful! Lovely writing, and I especially liked the beats of the horse's stride turning into words. |
| bima 2005-11-30 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* Aw so sad... but very good. |