Wow... That was fantabulous. I loved it! Beeyotiful, I'm going to go read the
sequel now! Lovely J/Zness.

Whoa... :D:D:D:D J/Z action! Woohoo! *dances around* I love this fic!

Lexie just made me aware of this gorgeous fic! Very pretty so far, J/Z pairings
rock my world! Off to read the rest! thank you for writing :)~J

Great story, very sad and emotional (*sniffle*).
I´m glad Jondy didn`t go through with the abortion. I really loved it.
Thank`s!

I see you're trying to make me cry again. :)
Very cool ending, though. It has it's sweet moments (Jondy decided not to abort the baby) and its sad ones (Zack at Manticore), but they mix together very well into that nice mix that was DA. The only disappointing thing about this story is that it's over.
I guess I'll have to go back and read it again, eh? ;)
Thank you for sharing it!

Well I'm so glad Jondy didn't abort the baby. I think it's good you kept the story going along with the plot line of Dark Angel. Very good. I greatly enjoyed this. Angst, sad ending but then Dark Angel always was a little gloomy. Thanks for updating so quickly. You're an awesome writer.
-Rose

pleas keep writtin' i can't wait to read the next chapter...i like the way you write ...please keep writtin'!

This made me cry. I was listening to Delta's Xmas song and I know the last part was set in August, but somehow it just fit. It was so bittersweet.
It made me cry. I knew you had an angsty ending, but I honestly thought Jondy had gotten rid of the baby and that would've been heart breaking.
I wish there was more, it's an awesome fic. It's really powerful and sweet. You're such a damn kick ** writer, I'm absolutely going to beg you to write more J/Z and S/K fics because you always do the characters justice, you make them real people.
This has to be one of my all time favourite J/Z fics and I *implore* you to write more X5 fic soon.

aweseome. absolutely fantastic. so emotional. im tearing at the eye and grinning. this was a brilliant fic. loved what you did with Zack in the pervious chapter. everyone has been in character. wonderful effort.
BR

Loved it. Thanks for not letting Jondy go through with the abortion. So is their a sequel?

"You can't handle it, so you jump into bed with the next guy you see?"
"Get rid of it, Jondy. Do it while you still have a choice."
Oh, could he be any more of an **?! (Well, he's Zack, so being that way kind of comes with the territory.) Still, I kind of wish someone would smack his stubborn head up against a brick wall.
Okay, I think I've vented some of my frustration now, lol, but I have to wonder. Jondy hasn't come out and said, "it's yours." Does Zack simply not seem to understand that there's the possibility that HE is the father? Or is he trying to take that possibility out of the circumstances by pretending that it doesn't exist? Something like that could crack that image, that facade that he's got going, so is ignoring it some form of self-preservation?
You do have me crying though. Jondy really seems to want this baby, but she's too scared to just say the heck with Zack. And the ending of this chapter doesn't seem so hopeful on this note. So, what's next? I hope you won't keep us waiting too long . . .

Oh no, why didn't Zack realize he was the father? Is Jondy really going to go through with the abortion? Someone's got to talk sense into Zack. I hope Syl goes and kicks Zack's ** or Zane does. Somebody has to knock some sense into him. We'll I want to know what happens. So keep writing and I'll keep reading and reviewing.
-Rose

This just keeps getting better and better. It's so realistic. You've nailed the characterisations. I love your descriptions and just everything about this fic. I'm really hoping Jondy and Zack get some sort of happy ending with each other, but I have this feeling you've written a killer angsty ending.
This is a beautiful fic I plan to print out the second our printer gets paper. I cannot wait until Ch 7. This story is too awesome.

I can’t believe that zack wouldn’t believe that the kids his. I really didn’t want jondy to go through with it. but it's your story and i get why she did it.
Thanks for posting the next chapter so quickly. Can’t wait for the next one.

Great story! I love your way of writing, especially how you describe Zack and use the plot of Season 1 for your own story. I cannot wait to read your next chapter.