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Shadewolf7
2007-03-07
ch 1,
abuseVery fun.
Rebel Goddess
2006-03-09
ch 1,
abuseAnd apparently coffee-shop-bravado. Excellent vignette. I love night-time Ninja Daniel so much. More please.
SeedC
2006-03-05
ch 1,
abuse:) I know this is an oldie - but a fun tale, thank you for it and might you do some more of Ninja Daniel?
Italian-Goil
2005-03-21
ch 1,
abuseDouble Yay! Super sequel :o) Even better than the first. :o) Your depiction of the coffee girl is so right on. :o)
nefret24
2004-04-02
ch 1,
abuseThat was wonderful. Every comment out of Jack's mouth perfectly in character and perfectly hilarious. Your talent and attention to detail never cease to amaze. Very cool fic.
dietcokechic
2004-01-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseYEah! I do enjoy these Daniel ninja stories. thank you so much for writing them!!
KariAnn
2003-11-29
ch 1,
abuseA Sequel, A Sequel, , Thel just wrote a Sequel. (I think I am giddy)
Nixa Jane
2003-11-26
ch 1,
abuseOMG! I was laughing so hard--if this is your way of adding a "wee bit o' humour" into a fic, I think I'd die laughing if you ever wrote full blown humor!

Awesome work, I can't wait to read the next ones!
pettygrew
2003-11-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseSM,it's at http://w.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1607835
sm
2003-11-25
ch 1, anon.
abusehey I realy liked this fic but havent read the first one could some one send a link to me. Ta.

hoodx
summer-c-nemec-quinn
2003-11-24
ch 1,
abuseI like it, great story, more please.
Earthling
2003-11-24
ch 1,
abuseluv it! He he! Perfect characterizations! brillant, funny and engaging! Rave reviews!
jezowen
2003-11-24
ch 1,
abuseYay! Another episode!
Good, believable dialogue - and funny as well :). Will there be another chapter?
Mara Jade Jedi
2003-11-24
ch 1,
abusehahahahaha!
great!

your writing style is excellent, veryflowing and easy to read! and i love the characteisation..i could actualy picture it!!great work!!
Dimac99
2003-11-24
ch 1,
abuse*Didn’t want anyone stealing Daniel while he was fetching coffee.* My favourite line in this excellent short! I also loved the conversation with Officer Franklin, particularly the Air Force motto bit, very funny. I'm looking forward to the other stories in the series so much, I'll even read the slash one!
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