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choccream24
2009-10-20 . chapter 1
Hahahaha! That was so funny. Hilarious!
BELLE
2009-10-06 . chapter 1
Wow! This was too much. I couldn't breathe through all my laughter. You've got to love Draco. Great job! Thanks.
Serenity Reigns
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
Review 200!
This story is awesome. I love how Malfoy was rude to both teams. I especially like this part:

"Incompetent Slytherin captain Marcus Flint – who incidentally, boys and girls, still rides upon the Nimbus 2001 generously donated by my father four years ago because he can’t afford his own – charges fiercely up the middle stretch of the pitch and towards the Gryffindor goal posts – done so in an amazingly straight line considering that the simpleton usually gets confused with uncomplicated directions. Flint - who has also been Quidditch captain for the eighth consecutive year in a row now - looking extremely tired and wheezing up there… but I suppose you would be, at his age - Hey, Marcus, how many years have you flunked now? About sixty, right? Maybe you should apply with Weasley to that ‘special school’ for ‘special young adults’ that we were talking about just yester - HEY! Watch it!"

This whole story was hilarious and was interesting to read as an all-dialogue story.
Insanity at its Fullest
2009-10-03 . chapter 1
I WOULD SELL MY SOUL TO GO TO A MATCH LIKE THAT.
VintageConspiracy
2009-09-13 . chapter 1
This brightened up my day spectacularly! (: Malfoy's commentary was awesome ... especially the ones directed at Ron. Awesome writing!
Cushion
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
That was highly amusing.

"Ugh, favouritism. It makes me sick.”

“Quite right, Draco.” - LOL. I love Snape!
Sable-eyed-lily
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
There were several parts in this story that had me in stitches. Particularly these parts:
"Oh, yes, Weasley, throwing your arms about like a complete moron will really keep the goals out. What, did your boyfriend Potter teach you that? Don’t think we don’t all know that you suck up to him in more ways than one…”

"Flint - who has also been Quidditch captain for the eighth consecutive year in a row now - looking extremely tired and wheezing up there… but I suppose you would be, at his age - Hey, Marcus, how many years have you flunked now? About sixty, right? Maybe you should apply with Weasley to that ‘special school’ for ‘special young adults’ that we were talking about just yester - HEY! Watch it!”

I adore this fic of yours. It had me in hysterical laughter the entire time. If only JKR had thought to put this into her books. That's would have been so hilarious. I had tears going down my face when I read the song about the Weasel and the Potty. How did you even come up with all this material? You are a genius in my book. I can't wait to read more fics like this from you. Again, this is a classic.

XOXO
Lils
Passionflowering
2009-08-11 . chapter 1
hahaha!! so hilarious XD!!
Patricia95
2009-08-11 . chapter 1
You are my hero! Loved Malfoy!
Soulcaster
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
wow thyat ** was funny i god Dracos comments hehwhwhwhehehehehe
The Group of One
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
Oh my god.
Just Oh My God. That was brilliant. xD
I could picture the whole thing. Draco's little 'ep!' was amusing.
Piole
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
Great fic, XD

Thanks for sharing!
Cimmerian Sorceress
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
THE most brilliant piece of work I've ever read unquestionably.
sasodei-iz-awesome
2009-06-10 . chapter 1
XD You can't help but NOT love Malfoy. He's just so good at all of this. XD -cracks up-

Peace, love, and all that **...
~Sasodeiizawesome~
AddictedToReading
2009-06-05 . chapter 1
Hilarious, absolutely hilarious! I like how Draco hates both teams and not just Griffindor.
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