I have to say, reading the first three, four chapters I was complaining and sighing but reading on since there were no other good Nabiki fanfics left. Your Akane is really OOC, I'm no fan of Nabiki making money for the family (destroys that what makes her character and why people like her), Genma and Soun are over the top, Ranma is too smart, ... in short, lots of cliches that - regardless of the inventive plot - made your story a copy.
Then chapter four came and twist after twist followed. you seemed to take a totally different direction. Nabiki was Nabiki again by refusing the engagement, Kasumi accepted but stayed Kasumi by saying she didn't love Ranma, but did it out of honour (which I can see her doing), and you made Akane human again by giving her some decent screen time. In more then one chapter you saved your complete story (and that is me being a Nabiki fan).
personally I'd go back and with the same mindset start changing chapter one, two and three, but that's just me.
Cheers mate,

I admit it, you are a great writer, "The Smallest of Actions" and "Nabiki Master of Anything Goes", are wonderful fics, however you got 45 stories and only 2 of those are finished and 1 of those 2 it's a oneshot.
I can read on your profile "I have never dropped a story and got no plans on doing so either. It's just that you may have to wait for quite a while before the next chapter shows up."
Well how long it's "a while"?, last time you updated one of your stories was more than a year ago, i even saw 2 of your fics picked up by others authors. ("Pervert Fu" and "Sex Ed with Sensei Tendo Nabiki")
My advice?, focus on 2 or 3 fics, having 43 unfinished stories it's a little too much, don't you think?
(Damn!, i need to get a life)
Anyway, Keep writing!

Hm. More than two years since the last update... This is very interesting fic and it'd be good to see it finished.

Interesting indeed. I'm enjoying the dynamic here. As Ranma becomes more civilized and less cartoonish, his world is similarly becoming more real and complicated. Greater rewards potentially, but also greater losses. And the honorbound loveless marriage is a nice touch in the direction of both. I know you tend to be a long time between updates... I'm hoping you're still thinking of this one.

You know, even though I could see Nabiki flashing him coming from a mile away, it's still funny.

More please.

need more brains! ok not brains exactly but it would be nice if you revived this story, its an awesome read and there aint nowhere near enough good Ranma/Kasumi fic about.

*mentally encourages Hawk* You can do it!!

Wow... I can't wait for the next part.

Amazing! A truly original Ranma story, well written, with depth, insight, and sincerity. As believable as a Ranma-based fantasy could be.
I'd like to see this resolved someday.
Mike

"The Tendo Nabiki Ultimate Anything Goes Negotiation Technique, the Nutcracker of Persuasion!"

"The Anything Goes School of Near Orgasmic Martial Arts!"

*roflmao*

You just HAVE to finish this! PleasePrettyPlease?!?

Very good story.
Please update soon.
I'm waiting for the next chapters.
Mit freundlichem Gruss
Shaithan

LOL! Akane actually came off as rather insightful. I notice she kept saying 'older sister' at the end there.
I suspect that she'd be in line to set Ranma up with Nabiki given the chance, both for Nabiki's sake and
for Kasumi's.

Wow. Excellent story. I hope you update soon.

Gah! Why aren't there more chapters to read!? There is so much potential here! So many ways for the plots to twist and turn. You've managed to capture my attention and draw me into the story and for that you have my sincere thanks. Now what you need to do is update! Go! Right now!... I'm waiting. Why isn't this story updated?

Anyway, I like the story. This chapter was left on a note of introspection, with all the girls finally able to admit to themselves how they feel, though they did need it brought up by others in order for them to really recognize what happened.

I'm looking forward to seeing how you handle Ukyo and Shampoo... also, will Ranma start training Kasumi? Especially if some of the craziness starts targetting her?

You have so many different things going on in here and then you add in all those other stories you're writing... You're very cruel to yourself I must say.

I don't mind though. It's great! I can't wait till an update.