This is so sad. It's really good, too bad that Tidus couldn't be with Yuna.

This is so sad! :: sniffle :: but it's great!
~on silver wings~
Lenne (aka Sariah Loire)

I really enjoyed this. Very emotional and well written.

Excellent. It had a such a rhythm and flow to it. The description was so vivid. I loved it.

Truly a wonderfully written story. The words just flow together...keep up this excellent work..except to see more from you.