 Katrina S. Forest 2/13/03 . chapter 1This was nice, I can kind of picture Haruka regreting being a senshi, only to come back to her senses later. There was a lot more dialouge than description, but I guess it works. My only complaint is that Michiru seems so helpless. I'd think she'd at least be able to turn back Kaorinite's attack. *shurgs* Ah, well. It's your story. Pretty good job. |