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Sarah
2009-10-21 . chapter 18
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep writing~ I'm begging here~
EmeraldGreenRose
2009-10-09 . chapter 18
I love this story so much! You're a really talented writed and please please please write another chapter soon!! x
Elliesmeow
2009-09-28 . chapter 18
I've enjoyed what you've posted so far. I hope it will be finished some day. I think you've done a good job showing the relationship between Hermione and Lucius. Not to mention Hermione's path to the Dark is very believable.

Hope things clear up for you soon, take care until then and thanks for posting.

-Ellie
Maddie
2009-09-28 . chapter 18
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POM-frenchreader
2009-09-07 . chapter 18
As it has been almost 3 years, I just subscribe to the alerts because you said 'someday', even if I don't think that day will come. But I like the story and it is a shame there is no end.
judepom
2009-08-18 . chapter 18
hello

I know it's been a very long time since you last updated this story,but it's really one of the best I've ever read on this website
I hope you'll finish it one day, even if it's with a different handwriting and a different state of mind
best wishes.
:)
moregoth
2009-07-05 . chapter 18
An impressive dark Hermione, you don't let her wake up one morning and randomly decide to betray everyone she knows. Instead she is seduced and there is a reason for her motivation to join the dark.
I do realise its been a long time since you updated but I would be delighted to read the end if you ever write it, til then I'll just have to imagine that the vision Hermione saw in the mirror of Erised as a fitting end!
My compliments to and intresting and great reading.
Mrs.Azriel RxDJxB Lestrange
2009-05-19 . chapter 18
This is an amazing story! A Death Eater she betrays could be Pittegrew? Please update again!
Fragorl
2009-05-13 . chapter 18
so. muh. love! i dont even know if ur ontinuing this story but u really should because it is made of awesome! I love the tension between Lucius and Hermione and the friendship between her and Bellatrix - this is one of the best fics that I have read! xx
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL
2009-05-03 . chapter 18
Amazing, Please Continue.
Labyrnith
2009-04-08 . chapter 18
I read this is the span of one night and a few early hours in the morning. I had less than six hours of sleep because all the while I was trying to sleep, I was thinking about your fic the whole time... And then my nerves was so bad when the internet connection stopped for 10 unbearable minutes, and I could not read your story. Every single chapter that I've read, I swear, was so exhilarating and so perfectly, expertly, wonderfully done that I'm so infatuated with your fic! It's the best fic I've ever read, and Lucius and Hermione's affair is so overly powerful that I cannot deny that it has haunted my mind every single second while I'm not reading it. Lucius' wanting for dominance... Hermione's turn to the Dark Side... His and her feelings all along... I mean, my goodness, that was so brilliant! I've never thought of it! They have a masochistic(?)(though maybe just Hermione...) kind of love, and it what attracts me the most. I love how you talk about Hermione's love... especially when she said to Harry, "… but, as I am sure you agree, Harry, love is the strongest force of all.” It's like -- WOW. Such deep words! Hermione's undying love for him... it's so (once again,) powerful. Likewise for Lucius,too. You got Lucius so in character and I rarely see anyone accomplishing the feat. He's cruel but at the same time it's his own charm (maybe just me). Because of you, I'm more infatuated with him more ever than before.

Your fic is utterly beautiful and superb and so I'm begging you to update even though it's been three years. You're a really talented writer and you've just made the fic of my wildest dreams. So please update and thank you so much for creating this wonderful story.
laurakyna
2009-03-05 . chapter 18
WOW...
Really good. I really like it, really well written, really original plot, etc...
PLease write some more soon...
(and get LM out really soon please...)
(and how long is this story going to be?)
(and will then plan work?)

i really like this story...
...so write more before i have to get the pitchforks out for some 'encouragement'... HINT HINT...!
Destined To Live in Darkness
2009-01-26 . chapter 18
I really like this story and I ask you to continue it or rihjt more impossible pairings
RileyAnastasia
2009-01-22 . chapter 18
i know it has been like 3 years since you wrote this but you have to finish it! i love this story so much and i want to find out what happens so badly. Please update!
jasmine-leigh
2009-01-17 . chapter 18
love it so far, please update again soon.
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