what a lovely tear jerker, a beautiful story, is there a follow up? it would be nice to see kayla a little older perhaps?

Can't belive i didn't review this when you first put it up hon :)
Still love it, especially Jacob's reaction to Jack and the fight in Jack;s office.
nice to see a happy ending to divide and conquer.

Sequal? Martouf's death was so sad, glad you could make it a little happier. Good work!!

Very Good..

This is a very beautiful although quite sad story, I enjoyed it very much. There are a few mistakes in spelling and you started the same paragraph twice, but it's totally forgivable. The only other thing is that Lantash wasn't killed with Martouf, he died while in Lt. Elliot in 'Last Stand' season 5. But as I said first, beautiful story telling, hope you write more.

Hey, I loved this!! Martouf/Sam stories are always great, but yours was wonderful!

Do we get a sequel? Find out what happens to Kayla?