awesome story!

that was so sweet! :)

great fanfic,.,. :)

ah, that was so touching. Kawaii ne!

Ayan! Na-iin love na tuloy ako para kay Kura % Neon! Cute naman silang pakinggan kaya ngalang mukhang katulong si Kura kung umasta... siguro protective lang talaga siya no? GOOD!

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Gosh! A real keeper!

I like the way you put all the characters together, i simply adore the pair!

Suited! How about a full fanfic about the two?

I'll be looking forward to that... Good Luck!

Bloody Priestess

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Wonderful. *applause* Simple yet eloquent. Keep writing.

the language was beautiful, emotions are described well...i like it..please go on...i want to see what happens next.

Kurapika/Neon It's over? Oh please continue! I love your awesome ficcy! Not many K/N fic writer out there...continue!

That was good.. Very like Kurapika. We see a brave new Neon here. One small thing, though. Neon can't/won't do Ghost Writer for herself. _

oh... this is so sweet, but too short! :*)

Hello, I'm Dita as you could see from up there. Um, I've read your story, "Where his Duties End"? Yah, It's a very nice story, no complaints, I really like it. So, I was wondering if it's too much to ask... When are you going to dot he second chapter?
Thankyou, hope you reply soon,
(My real name, Grachie :3)

Sweet and tragic.

NICE!
Love it...
Ah... KURAXNEON ROX!

syao-chan!

another great fic...

though i wanna see you write kuroro/neon fic...plz? i just wanna see someone write that couple . gah...well i like this one because kurapika isnt ooc o wah...i hope u can write another hao/anna fic too! peace

Kurapika was so sweet ang cute naman...

Poor Neon-chan... nawala nen niya at tatay niya... -

This is truly a wonderful fic