This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

described in one word sweet

Aww, love the ending!

Oh Ash, Buttons is VERY important!"

"How come?"

"Well, Cinderella just wouldn't be Cinderella without her Buttons..."

"Yeah, her dress would fall off and everyone would see she's a man!" Misty walloped Ash with her mallet.

"Not funny you little twerp!"

LOL, LOL, LOL, AND OH YES, LOL!

I laughed until i fell off my seat!

aaml:)

First off I'd like to say that I really liked your story. It was cute and fun but I do have some things that might make it better. It is mostly one thing really but as a writer I think it is something that you can benefit from. I would not call the show a pantomime. I know that you are going for the idea of the show boat episode and I applaud you for that but theatrically, a pantomime is a scene that is done without words. You could call it a play, a one act, a vinyet (a scene), there is singing so it could be called a musical or a musical-let (a growing term for a one act musical) or others. Proper terminology can be important.

Like I said before I loved the story and how you took liberties to make a classic story something new and exciting for your audience.

Keep writing!

BWAHA, that was a perfect version, the ending was just too cute for words! -)

that is so cool! you know i just remembered that Cinderella and the Prince know each other for all of like two hours and 5 minutes and they decide to get married, it's so stupid your version is way better.

i only have on word for this

'aw...'

heheheh

yeah, poor misty, never getting her bike, but i doubt she's complaining why. heheheh

he he I love this story it's cute I like when the audience starts yelling at Greg "Prince Charming" and calling him pansy boy and stuff lol classic!

Is there really a servant like this in one of the real versions of Cinderella?

LOL i totally luv this story . itwas cute and funny

Awsome!

Bravo! Bravo indeed! You really did your homework on this one, eh?

Another cute one. Now, back to that horror story...

THAT WAS SO SWEET! _ I loved it! *_* Absoulutely loved it!