Reviews for Chains of Time

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icedragongurl16 2006-08-22 ch 7,	abuseDude update soon...this was awesome chap...except short but awesome
animegirl417 2006-08-22 ch 7,	abusewhoa! you updated. lol! It was a nice chapter. it's getting interesting and i want to know more. So update soon, k?
Yumiko Yoshihana 2005-11-21 ch 6, anon.	abusereally really really good story. I also am a HUGE Kurome Shiretsu fan (thats how I foud you) I really REally hop you update! Soon!
icedragongurl16 2005-11-04 ch 6,	abusei lov ethis story i can't wait till the next chapter. update soon.
Michiko Yokisama 2005-07-15 ch 6, anon.	abusewow! this is a wonderful story! when i started reading, i wasn't sure if it would be good because there are so many fics out there like this one. but! this is soo good! you've got wonderful descriptions; just enough for a great image, but not so much that you want to skip over it (i hate it when that happens because i know i should read it but i can't force myself to ^^') so anyways, great fic, keep up the wonderful work, and i hope you update soon!
Crazy Hyper Lady 2005-05-05 ch 5,	abuseWHAT? You're leaving me hanging like this? You need to write more now!
Cattibrie393 2004-09-13 ch 6,	abuseWell, hopefully not super short. Neat idea.
Shea Loner 2004-07-20 ch 6,	abusehehehe hopefully the next will be super long grins later
The Fallen Caryatid 2004-07-09 ch 6,	abuseHola, Lynya. Your friend Mariposa here...like this pen name? It's pretty much been a secret since sorhomore year. But since we're finally out of high school, I don't see the problem with giving it out anymore. Go check out my two fics. Now about your story: I have to say, I think I'm one of the people who truly appreciates the characters in this fic. I was a bit worried if your other readers would become confused by the introduction of so many characters. I know that's what Kristen always complains about on my orginal stories, anyway... But anyway, I like what you've got so far. Longer chapters would be neato, kiddo. Yes. Um. What else? Uh...Oh! No A/N in the middle of the story. C'mon, you know better than that. It breaks up the flow of the fic. Control yourself, Iago...er, Lynya. Email me. We shall not lose touch! Oh, and I've got a fictionpress pen name, too: fictionpress.com/~thefallencaryatid
Kainaku Hotaru 2004-07-05 ch 6,	abuseYay! another superb chapter! Pocky and Kudos for you! It's one AM. Don't expect much more right now... ^^;;
animegirl417 2004-07-05 ch 6,	abusehey, Its been a real long time since you updated. Im glad you did! It seemed like you put a lot of thought into this chapter. I noticed a whole lot of detail which i great. I hope you update soon, i'll be sure to read. Bye
bb16 2004-06-17 ch 5, anon.	abuseThat was SO GREAT! Please hurry and Update! This is such a cool story! You are a good writer... Oh yeah and I'll be cecking to see when you update, so do Hurry!
Sonrisa de Noche 2004-02-04 ch 1,	abusewaves hand at Lynya Bugger off, I'm trying to finish reading it! So far, so good--although I reserve my judgement until the end. But I will say that you've come a far ways from "Help from the Great Above." This is a good thing, it means that you're growing as a writer. Pause...blink Which reminds me, where's that story you're doing for Mitchell? You promised I could read it!
animegirl417 2004-02-02 ch 5,	abusehey! please update soon! It's getting very interesting. can't wait for the next chapter, Bye!
anime girl 2004-01-17 ch 5, anon.	abusehi, please update soon. It's very intresting.

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