If this is set in the cave before he's caught, then he's in for a nasty realization when Snape tries to hand him over to the dementors! I'm guessing that it's a one shot? It's very good. Sometimes your friends DO know you better than you know yourself. Hope you'll take a look at my fics, too.

Heh. I found out your pen name.
Anyway, great fic. Very perseptive (did I spell that right?). I liked it.

That's just good writting. Period. The only thing that could make it better? Don't leave us hanging by a string... give us a happy ending.

that was great. i love it. please continlue.

Hm. I'm seeing a sequel here. Although I'd like to say that he deserves it. He reminds me of Ben; that's the problem. GOlden boy. Roman god...that's what he looks like, you know. Some statue of a Greek god.

And now I'm done. Well written.

Ah I love Sirius. Looking good! Although Im a bit disturbed by the hints of a Sirius/Snape romance here (or is that just me?) But oh well its your fic. Very well written. Is there going to be more of this?

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