Reviews for Too Much Like Her

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Meee 2008-04-06 ch 15, anon.	abusei love this story !! its great !!
Morbidmuch 2007-07-06 ch 14,	abuseI absolutley love it! I would have reviewed every chapter, but I have the annyoing habit off not reviewing a story until teh last chapter :P
Hermioneee 2007-06-29 ch 10,	abuseI thought the way Jack introduced the idea of children was cute. I thought his revelation, though " YES, ALRIGHT??", was cheesy. When you write Jsck's dialogue, imagine Johnny Depp saying those words and acting them out.
Hermioneee 2007-06-29 ch 9,	abusecheck your spelling!! exited is spelt " excited". Check other things, too.
Hermioneee 2007-06-29 ch 5,	abuseok..in my last review, i know i said something abut " cheesy", and this chapter is the same. Maybe try using a better transition; it seems very rushed how the Black Pearl was suddenly pulling into port. Expiriment with transitions, and then you will find a good rhythmn for your story. I liked how Elizabeth knew spot on that Jack and AnaMaria were married. Nothing like womanly intuition, eh?
Hermioneee 2007-06-29 ch 4,	abuseits kind of cheesy, lk the dialogue and plot. Check your grammar, but your spelling and punctuation is fine. thank you for sharing!!
Mandylion 2007-06-01 ch 15,	abuseI'd review on every single chapter, because that's what you deserve, but I'm too lazy now, maybe tomorrow. I absolutely loved it, I don't know if you'll still read this, I just wanted to let you know... I loved it.
RHrBxEJavaJunkiePrincess201... 2006-09-07 ch 1,	abuseaw! That was one of the sweetest stories i've ever read! LOVED IT! much love from Emma "You're not making any sense at all" ~Captain Jack Sparrow
pirategal101 2006-08-25 ch 15,	abuseomg i loved this story a lot!! omg i just about cried when will was dreaming that elizabeth had died, so sad!! anywayz im going to read the sequal now, i hope it will be as good as this story was:)
trust kill trust 2006-07-19 ch 15,	abuseI dont care how long ago you finished this, but, I am in love with it. you are an AMAZING writer
A Bit Closer Johnny 2006-05-13 ch 3,	abuseI love this story! So cute!
Princess.Jack.N.Anamaria 2005-10-22 ch 15,	abuseI know that you've already made a sequal to this story, and even though I've read and reviewed it, I just had to tell you that this story is really interesting to me. Now if you excuse me, I need to talk to to Will, Ana, Liz, and Jack for a moment. Me: Hey guys, how ya feelin'? Liz: How do you think we're feelin'! Will: Liz, calm down. She was just askin' a question. Liz: I don't care! She read the story, she knows how we feel. What kind 'o question is that?! Will: I know, darling, but ye don't have to snap at her. Liz: I'LL SNAP AT WHOEVER I FEEL! Will: Hey, watch yer tone, love! Liz: No, I have to get this off my chest. Now move it, Turner. Me: If you'll excuse me, I'll go find Jack n' Ana now. Liz: Whatever. Will:whispers to Shy Pirate Lass She still has her mood swings. Me: I've noticed. Bye, Will, and good luck! :) Well, I don't want my whole review to be about me taliking to the characters. So I won't converse with JHack and Ana. See ya, mate! P.S. YOUR STORY IS TOTALLY WICKED! wink Keep up the good work. P.S.S. This story is on my fav. list. Now, I think I should go help Will before Lizzie decides to pummel him.
diveprincess 2005-05-10 ch 1,	abuseSo adding to my favorites!
Johnnycakesdepp 2004-12-20 ch 15,	abuseThis was soo incredibly cute! I didn't know The Angels He'd Die For was the sequel to this. (no offense but I don't read author's notes much) Anyway I actually grasped the concept without reading Too Much Like Her. Anyway hope you update the sequel soon and write more POTC: JA fics!
Smithy 2004-11-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love the way Will is so sweet and kind to the lady he loves. He's a true romantic hero. Kudos to the way they made Orlando Bloom's character a true, honest-to-goodness hero. And the man cried. That's what makes him more endearing. He cried.

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