just wanted to point this out, even though you've probably already been told but, unicorns don't have wings.

Unicorn- Horn (no wings)
Pegasus- Wings (no horn)

the two together is...well i don't no. sorry. :)

so...
I thought that harry had 'little chance of surviving'
he made a spectacularly easy recovery from almost certain death... sigh

hm...
your plot is good but your spelling could use a lot of work.
spelling controll goes a long way.
seriously... Detension ?
wtf

Loved it! so can't wait for the next chapter.

please please update soon!

please update!

nice chapter. i cant wait until they reveal themselves to the marauders. please please please update really soon! i think it would be awsome too if u updated comforts from the unexpected. i love that story!! please udpate really soon!

it's interesting and frustrating at times especially at the characters actions in the story. What kind of mine set does Sirius have any way. Who said just because you have siythrin tradits you automaticly a death eater. Just because he is raised partially as a slytherin doesn't mean he will go bad because of it. It's the action define the person not the house. They are just kids. Ignore of the reality or the mind set of wise individual. And for friends, what kind of friend will judge just because you so happen to have a ability that a evil lord have. It desn't define you evil just for having that ability. It's really stupid and pity prejustice. The Muraders think they are all honorable and stuff, such a lie. They are no better than anyone else who are just as prejustice. I can understand the waryness because of it but it's really stupid to automatic think it's bad or evil. good job.

this is a good story ,the quote that you used
on this chapter what story did you get it from it sounds intresting

UPDATE!

This fic is so bad, I almost feel like crying, but I'll transfer my pain into anger and get on witht the flame. Harry was beaten up by a woman with a broken leg?? And what's this about a whip? Why would she need a whip? Where would she get one? I don't know about you, but I don't know of any whip shops in my area. You don't need a whip to beat someone with. A belt is the traditional option, but a fist works just as well, thought in a more bruise than whelt way.

Why would Snape feel like throwing up at the sight of Harry's back? He's a hardened Death Eater spy, if he threw up at the least little thing, his cover would be blown in about two seconds.

Your chapters are pitifully short and the quote business is rubbish. Why do you quote Harry Potter of all things? Everyone already knows those quotes! Find some by someone else. I know there are billions of quote directories out there. I personally recommend Winston Churchill, Mark Twain and Oscar Wilde, three of my personal favourites.

Get a grip.

yeah update please.

Ooh, more suspicions arrive! Loving it. Thanks! :D

OMG! I loved this story! you got to keep writing it!!

this is seriously wkd!
i luv it!
can't w8 to c wot happens next.
update soon.
k, take care :)