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Reviews For: Ancient Empires

Shadewolf7
2007-03-07
ch 1,
abuse*grin*
Rebel Goddess
2006-03-09
ch 1,
abusePoor, poor Daniel. I loved this though. Ninja-Daniel is just the best. Poor MS didn't know what he was doing but you've made my face hurt from laughing so much. Simply brilliant.
SeedC
2006-03-07
ch 1,
abuseI don't know HOW I missed this story of yours... Hooray, Daniel Ninja saves the day again! :D
I know it's an oldie - but a goodie, too :)
Italian-Goil
2005-03-21
ch 1,
abuseOhh! Please, please, please more Ninja stories! SO funny! :o)

-'Jack continued with a sly grin. “I believe the closest English translation would be… ‘What are you? Some kind of ninja?’."'

Oh my word!! Please...more soon!
nefret24
2004-04-02
ch 1,
abuseBrillant again!! Jack's translation is priceless, as is Daniel's pouting at the end. (He would so do that- no pain is worse than that of unsatisfied curiosity ;) ) Very very cool- not only hilarious but educational. Thank you for making my day. ;)
KariAnn
2003-11-29
ch 1,
abuseI have so much smiles after reading your short stories.
Dimac99
2003-11-28
ch 1,
abuse“I believe the closest English translation would be… ‘What are you? Some kind of ninja?’.”
An amusing line which becomes absolutely hysterical if you've read the other stories... I'm trying to avoid coughing up a lung here after laughing so hard!
Mara Jade Jedi
2003-11-27
ch 1,
abusehehe! another great little addition to this eh...saga? well whatever it is its great!!

is there any more? cause this could go SO far! :D:D
jnorman
2003-11-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseAwesome series! I love it! Can't wait for the next installment!
Nixa Jane
2003-11-26
ch 1,
abuseAw! This one was really cute. Great job! :D
Sethoz
2003-11-26
ch 1,
abuselovely! I love this series, Danny as a ninja, it's all so brillent. Looking forward to the next one in the series.

...I love this...

~Sethoz
Liechtensteinerin
2003-11-26
ch 1,
abuseI love it! keep up the good work!
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