very good, different nice work

^^; Ehh! I loved it. Very stuning. You did an amazing job. It's so well written! *Sigh* The El/Sands pairing is hard to find.

Reading this to Sting's "Shape of my heart"...What can be better? Poor Sands...Very nice story, but do you think he can still cry, physically, I mean?

Awesome! Please, please, please write more. :D

I finally saw this movie after waiting forever for it to come out and now I'm addicted to the fanficiton. And yours was quite exceptional. Love the line, ". . . and El closed his eyes because it wasn't really fair to look when the other person couldn't-" Great job all around.

*shiver* i like it.

whoa... tha was... whoa... im speachless... whoa! tha was... awesome! as i said before... whoa
CaptnKat
PS>ye ended it in an awesome way, very good.

No "FINIS"! Never "FINIS"! Wonderful bit, this. Alas, there is a sorry amount of El/Sands fics for me to get my grubby lil fingers on... So continue! Provide! Entertain! WRITE MORE!

YES! YES! YES!
That was totally amazing!
That was awesome and brilliant and great and all other words that mean...
YOU ROCK!
Write another, please write another!
This is totally awesome and I adore you and your writing!
YEAY YEAY YEAY!
FLW69 (on crack so don't worry)

YES YES YES!
You are a great writer! You can get that whole...what's the word?...pinaz just right! (I don't know if that's an actual word but, I don't give a hoot!)
Mega congrats on this, it was awesome, kinda cheered me up a bit..I'm currently on a search for all things OUATIM...luck is not on my side, if ya got any ideas or anything...please email me and tell me...I think it's in me profile..but on the safe side.
demoniclittlegirl@yahoo.co.uk

Very very hot. I love the desperation, how it isn't neat and pretty. I love this line: "He wrapped a leg around the mariachi's thigh and pushed, up and hard and fast and don't let me think ever again, just touch me like this, hands down my back and mouth on my throat and nothing but this is real." Poor Sands. When the reality is as sucky as his is, it's no wonder he doesn't want to deal with it.

I hope you continue with this!

Great job, Sands can be bothersome. I too start writing sweetly and nice...then all of a sudden Sands takes over, and who knows what will come out!

Really now, who are you trying to kid, Sands HAPPY? "Just this, just like that, if he could have this forever as his one shining ** moment he'd be happy..."

Fine fic. You made them think and act. Good job.
SerenaD

That was...stunning, beautifu. I loved it.

-gypsy

Wow, I loved it! You did an excellent job.