beautiful. simply breathtaking.

Are you still working on this? I hope so! ^_^

Very good! this story is awesome. Keep going i look forward to future chapters. you have real talent. Now i am off adios.

Ahh, nice. I'm really interested to see what happens. ^__^

Hey,
Well I just wanted to say that overall the story is pretty decent. It could use a lot more action though, and yes I realize that in the next chapters there probably will be. I like the way the story is going so far, and the way you write is very nice. Keep up the good work.

I liked it. It reminds me of the game... but I have a porblem, it has been so long, and I do not have the game. Could yu please, I don't know, make a chart of the Dragoons? (that is only if you want to)
Sincerely
Aisler
And TTO
(I REALLY LIKED IT)

this is very nicely done! i like fics about the original dragoons. you should write more!

Yay, old Dragoon fic! I'd like to see more as this, especially since it's not totally ignoring Kanzas and Belzac. ^_^ It's also a nice touch that someone actually got ** off at Shirley for screwing up, for once. It's a minor detail, but it's one you notice when you read something like this. "Wait... someone got mad at... SHIRLEY?"

Aw, how sad! Why would Damia make a rune like that, though, if she wouldn't want to remember it? Or maybe I'm confused, because she wrote the names...

Hey Jeriana!
Looks like you're off to a great start. I really enjoyed this chapter and I hope to see more from you.
Later!
~ssp47

I applaud you on a very good job. The story is wonderful. I look forward ot new chapters and to your other works.

Yay, it's an original Dragoon fic! I like the description, too, and the interaction between the characters. And the premise of this sounds really interesting. It's going to be interesting to see what happens and how everyone deals with it. ^^