A very weird story to say the least.

That was...

I'm stuck between "awesome" and "confusing"

But I really liked it a lot. It was totally different from other stories, in a really good way.

Anyway, it is a great story. :)

nice but confusing

Wow. Call me 4 years late for finding this story now. This story was incredible though. I'm amazed and awed. It was also shocking. I'm really glad you ended it where you did, because it's difficult for some people to end a story and if you didn't right then, it could have become awkward to end it any where else. Great job.

I liked that. The ending was a bit of a cliff-hanger, but i think that it suits this story.

Amazing and remarkably creepy. I really enjoyed it, and I liked the way you ended it. I think you did a really good job, you have a lot of talent.

complete? complete? how can that be complete? their are so many unanswered questions! plz, this is really good, write an epologe(sp?)!

O.o that was.. interesting.. i would have better comments, if not for the fact it is 7 in the morning, and i didn't sleep last night -_-

GOOD JOB!

Cool! Please do a sequel!

*BREATHE* STORY IN THE WHOLE WORLD! _v I've always admired your work, and this story made me realize how I nevered reviewed any of it.

*would enthusiastically add to favorites..but already has*

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*deletes it from favorites and adds it again*

*shiver* Wow... I don't honestly know why it took me so long to actually finish reading this, but... wow.
What's to be said? Great description throughout, a creepy atmosphere and a very well captured funeral scene (speaking from experience of my step-dad's funeral in November). I honestly had no idea what to expect, right up to the very end of this, but when it came the ending was fantastic.
Having finally reminded myself why I've got you on author alerts, I intend to read more at another time! Keep up the great work _

Wow! Great ending.

This is not me reviewing chapter one, this is me being stupid. That was the end? (I'm an idiot -.-;) Well, I have to say, now that I think about it, it was an ingenius place to leave off. I'm just used to fanfics that go on forever. . And that story was just so cool I didn't want it to end! This is so going on my favorite's list. Oh, if only there were more fanfictions this good... please write another one soon!
Take a bow!
A-chan .

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Woah.
I'm sorry, there's just...no way to put how completely awesome that was...
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*speechless*
That's so perfect, it's just-and the ending, how it cuts off-and the writing style, it's...I'm not being articulate! Write more stories of amazing powers and amazingness! You are going on my favorite author's list, so I'd better see some more when I look you up.
Rock on, Shiroi Yami

Refreshingly well-written and generally awesome! It's funny - even though he's technically still *dead*, it kinda made me happy when Yuugi got up at the end. There is something completely eerie and unnatural about Yuugi being all still and quiet...
Anyway, update faster this time! I'm so into this, I can't wait to see where it's going. Ever read/watch Hellsing? The manga is great and if you haven't picked it up, I suggest you do. Arucard is the epitome of awesome vampires.
Your writing style is captivating. Please keep writing!
A-chan .