excellent chapter, very well written. great grammar/

Youve set up a very complicated story line and a very in depth analysis of events, I'm extremelly impressed! Could you write more though?

can you please finish the story:[

why did you stop this it was veyr good plz finish

Please u have got 2 update this

update! update! update! update! update! update!

Write more! Plz man! Or write another story which follows up to this one! I especially liked how you made taking down rock types Raiden's specialty!

There's a bit of incorrect Pokemon physics. Once a pokemon has been caught by a pokeball, it's marked by that pokeball and other pokeballs will not be able to catch it. Also back in Chapter 4 Ash couldn't release the Pidgey just by letting it out, there's a special way to actual release it which will erase the pokeballs mark.

You have captured both Anime universes perfectly, how did you come up with such original attacks such as Wind Cannon, Fire Spin and Cyclone Spin Attack? Your creativity would be envied by the original authors. This makes it one of the best fanfics I have ever read!

Well, that was amusing enough. I wonder where this will head off too.

If rapidash was female i'd say evolve it into a Nightmare. :)

For more information google d&dnightmare (Images for how it looks, normal google for the stats)

:)

After just reading Chapter 1, I feel you have captured both Universes perrfectly, interesting idea of using Gods, a potion and a high tech pokeball to bring the Universes together. One thing I thought you should have done was use a later more skilled Ranma in the story, at least after the bakusai tenketsu story arc or the hiryu shoten ha story arc. Keep up the good work.

Huh, not bad. Could use an ending but I doubt thats going to happen. Ranma seems a litttle out of character without all the high jinx from dealing with his curse, also, maybe a beit to mature. But that could be what would happen with out Genma and the rest continually screwing with him.

awesome story, I really enjoyed how you blended the two series together.

hey why did you stop writing such an awesome and funny fic? Please continue it!

i love this story i m ADDICTED 2 ranma and raiden please continue

Cool story, but the names of the attacks could use some serious work.