Reviews for Bringer of Heaven and Earth

Reviews For: Bringer of Heaven and Earth

Lamby 2005-10-10 ch 3,	abuseLovely ending. I like it lots. Take care, Lamby
Lamby 2005-10-10 ch 2,	abuseSorry its taken me forever to get back to reading this. Still a beautifully written peice, well done. Lamby
... 2005-04-17 ch 3, anon.	abuseupdate please
MoonlightPhoenix3 2004-10-14 ch 3,	abuseThis story has potential, I just wish you had involved Xavier's canon son. But then that would be screwy because no sane woman would want to have a child with Legion. Don't know who Legion is? Check on your canon before writing a relative fiction, that's all I'm saying. ~MP3 PS: If you update soon, I'll tell you who Legion is.
Ricki 2004-02-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseSomeone said "not a Sue, but close." Excuse me? This is one of the worst Mary Sues I've ever seen. I hope this is a joke, because otherwise you'd need some sense smacked into you.
Kazuya 2003-12-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice story Kristal very poetic first chapter
Tacky 2003-12-28 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis chapter was good. I can't wait to read the rest of the story.
Astrid 2003-12-28 ch 2, anon.	abuseI am so happy that you decide to write this fic again. This chapter is a really good one, I think I understand Eliza's situation a little better now. I hope that you will have more interactions between Xavier and Eliza, she is, after all, Xavier's granddaughter. Good luck with writing! (especially with this fic :) ) Please post more soon?
Pyro Bear 2003-12-25 ch 2,	abuseI like Eliza, she's strong, very, very strong. She's well written, though there isn't enough for me to see if she's bordering on Mary-Sue. Right now she isn't. I look foward to her powers manifesting and what's going to happen next.
Astrid 2003-11-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice start, I wonder why Eliza didn't want to go to the school... Well, I hope you will update soon. I really am looking forward reading more about this story.
Lamby 2003-11-28 ch 1,	abuseVery very cool! Excellently written, you have a real gift- don't waste it, write more and email me when you do so I can keep reading! Can't wait. Would appreciate a review in return?
Kat107 2003-11-27 ch 1,	abuseyeah! please continue it! kudos!
NightFaery 2003-11-26 ch 1,	abuseHey-low. I think that you set up your story nicely with all sorts of things that could become important and interesting later on, but my only fear is that you might've made your main character too powerful. Not a Mary-Sue, but close... i'm also a little confused as to what her power is, but i'm sure you'll clear that up. Maybe giving her really strong telepathy, and somewhat weaker telekenesis, or vice versa... but being really really perceptive in both, especially at 14 with little/no training is a bit much... keep writing, i'd like to see where this goes. : )

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