hi i loved the story-line um im picturing what happens when gohan and videl gets them and the song i bet is called 30 minutes

I really love this story X3 plz continue it! It's so cute, and I love Gohan-chan so much X3

I for one liked this. update plz and ignore allthoseother dickheads that don't like this fic!

Going, Going, Going, keep this fic a going. Please Update! This is a good story! UPDATE!*

Where is this Passinby person! Cause I like to bug people! So I need to know where the target is! I reviewed this chapter cause I can't review chapter 2.

I'm in fifth grade too! smiles! NOW KEEP
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awesome update soon

I like this fic u should continue... but u have way 2 many A/Ns

This could be good, mostly because I liked Gohan a lot better when he was small. And I will attack all flamers with my FIRE EXTINGUISHER OF ULTIMATE FLAMER DOOM (tm)

Cut out the author's notes crap. Nobody wants to have to read around that stuff. They aren't funny and they can make things confusing. Some of those suckers were so long I almost forgot what I had just read. OTHERWISE...all is well so far

Actually I thought that this story was rather good. Though I personaly think that it would have been better if it was to take place before the Buu saga, but that's just my opinion.besides that it's very good and original as far as I can tell so keep it up and up-date soon

way too much author notes

please update soon

hi can you update date this story please??

AMBER! HI! Tis I! (rhyming)*holds for claps, but doesn't get any*...Emerald-green! I finally got around to reading one of your stories! -_-;; Well tis was funny as! LOL! Well you need to read this Orphen one I will be putting up soon. Lol, Orphen...Oh oh oh, and I wanna say something to veggie! like Hi or something, coz he's like whoa, and to gohan as well! coz he is like whoa, ok
LOVE DA FICCY!