The things Sue Ellen wrote reminded me of all those long-winded rants you would post in all the Arthur boards. Are you still angry about that "Muffy Goes Metropolitan" episode?

It's a great story! However, I don't fully agree about Jenna being pretty. She looks very pleasant, but she's not THAT pretty. To tell you the truth, I've always thought Muffy Crosswire is the prettiest girl in her class.

"Dear Diary: I'm starting a new diary after the old one was burned. I don't remember very much of what was in the old diary. I'll just write things down as I remember them. Muffy gave me this new journal. I think she just wants me to feel like she owns me. Sometimes I want to slap that stupid snob."

hmm, in that episode, sue ellen didn't seem to be that bothered when she finally gave in and accepted muffy's new diary. but eh, you never know...

Wow...wow...wow...
This is so weird. And so cool. I love your stories! How in the world do you think this stuff up?

I thought that Sue Ellen wished her HIV away on the unicorn horn. Did I miss why it didn't work? Well, I guess so...

Another great one! You can't leave it at this cliff hanger, you just can't. I implore you to explian everything!

I found this chapter to be alright. A little surprised at the cliffhanger. Hopefully, it will be resolved. I would like to add that your stories are great. They're very creative. Especially this one. You're becoming a better writer with each story. Keep it up!

There was nothing she could do.
There was one thing she could do...
Interesting two lines... kind of like a twist. ^-^
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This chapter is confusing! lol.

So THAT'S why Sue Ellen does martial arts!

*mutters to herself* I don't belive it. I don't believe it. I don't believe it...
No HIV?? Wha-? But...

I wonder about that very question too...
(For some reason a part of my last review had been cut off... odd)

Adil Adil Adil... lol.

Things just got even more interesting, if that were possible. Excellent job so far, on all of your Arthur fanfics!

I feel that the journal entries weren't quite at all like how Sue Ellen truly writes. In the show we sometimes get to see what she writes as she says them aloud...
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Francine could enver eat meat? Then how come in the episode "Francine's Split Decision" she is having roast beef at the Bar Mitzvah? (She ended up not eating it though since she faked feeling queasy and her parents got worried.
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Francine is left handed? Is that in the show or something you just put in? I thought only Alan was left handed...

Shouldn't Adil been on his knees? *mutters* of course not. He doesn't know what he's doing...
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Where did Dallin, a kindergarterner learn the word 'grasp'?
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(I KNEW that was a dream!)
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*Note- 'When life gives you lemons, the tough get going.' that 'get' should be 'gets.' ^_^