I LOVE YOUR STORY! Please keep on writing because i really want to know what happens next. I am a die-hard hufflepuff fan! What's with Amelia and the death eaters?When's justin gunna ask Susan out? You write so well.

Great fic. The world needs more strong Hufflepuff fics. I refuse to believe that they are actually just stupid pushovers - just look at what they do in cannon. This is brilliantly written and I hope that one day you might continue it.

:)

i loved your story. if i could jion i would but i cant because it's closed because of spam. Plz plz plz plz let me join! Could you plz write more because i've been dying to know what happens next for ages! it must have taken you a really long time! ican't type nearly as much as that. i am a huge supporter of hufflepuff and i can't see why griffindor shouldget all the fame and glory when hufflepuff is just as important! =) plz write more on your story soon if you can! i loved it!
From hufflepuffs biggest fan
P.S could you try and talk to the guy/girl incharge of this web page and ask him/her to let me join plz?

Oh my god, haha "Does too much sex turn you into a mandrake?" brilliant story, hope you consider updating...

I noticed you used alot mof J. K. Rowling styled writting there. (-:

Please update. I never used to like fan fiction before I stumbled upon this fic and now I'm hooked. I hope (asininely?) that one day you will write more.

Hufflepuff pride!

that was one of the best fan fictions i ever read!! i really do hope you extend it you could make a book! i do think no one give us bagders enough respect i mean seriously my own sis is a slytherin its horrible ( not really) but yeas it was a great story thanks for writing it!

oh OH oh oh, I also looked at your eljay profile, we have the same birthday.

Hee, Hufflepuff!

OH my GOD someone agrees with me about Hufflepuffs!

*is pretty much a muggle Hannah Abbott*

Also, also, also, LOVE the mandrake idea, LOVE the storyline, LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

I love it. You'd have to be dumb or have no sense of humor not to laugh at this.

You know why this is such a painful, honest-to-goodness parody? Because it's so scarily believable - so spot on it hurts. As much as it made me cringe reading this (as I do like Harry and the Trio and so on), it was definitely worth it. I love the way you infuse what could just have been a sort of self-serving anti-Gryffindor rant with a sturdy, engaging plot. Your characterisation's hilariously spot on, too - I just loved the dynamic between Justin, Hannah, Susan and the rest. I like how normal they seemed, too - like normal teenagers trying to survive in a war-torn world instead of the lofy, self-sacrificing heroes a lot of authors in fanfiction like to propagate.

I'm definitely adding this to my C2, if only as an example of how the most effective parodies should be done. But this story is more than that - more than laughs, more than an amusing change-of-viewpoint for the entire HP series. It's a real, beautiful story with an interesting vision, and I laud you for taking the time to lift it out from the passageways of your (obviously rather interesting) imagination in order to share it with fandom at large. :)

Or, if you want the tl;dr summary:

Great stuff! Write more XD

- E. M.

snape's father w

I love this story. I have to take it slightly spoof-like, but the snarkiness and the strong friendship is quite fun.

And the sex-ed idea? Hilarious.

Too bad you don't seem to be writing anymore.

Terribly good. I love the characterizations of the Hufflepuffs, and how you portrayed the Gryffindors and Slytherins, as people who aren't perfect - you've managed to spot a lot of their weaknesses, and that's really good, especially as it's coming from Hufflepuffs and not Slytherins - something you don't see everyday. The fics has become more intriguing since you introduced Amelia and her (side?)story, and I must confess that I hope you update soon. Or eventually...

I LOVE THIS STORY!

(have I reviewed this already?? does'nt matter!)

I love your Hannah! and your Zacharias! (H/Z would be cool...I don't think I've seen that anywhere...)oh.. And your Justin! and your Ernie! and Susan!

I feel like I know them..they sound like the kind of people I would be friends with!

There is so many funny lines here so I don't think I'll quote anything but...God! I love this story!! :D

please update?