Nice dialogue there. It was plotted very well, and greatly written!

Great dialog. Wonderful humour. And a very witty inside view of Trent. Unfortunately the story has a weak ending. Still: I loved the goldfish story arc.
4 out 5 stars

that was cool. imaginitive- and fit the characters. i appreciate it when daria and trent don't bawl out that they love each other within the first 500 words. Thanks. It was good- good in character stuff. very believable. continue it?

that's right.

lull us into thinking we'll never see anything again but dross and wash.

and then feed them out slowly, making us crave more, more MORE!

you know how well you write. I know you're confident enough in your own skills to not need gratification, and i think i've said it all before anyway.

thankyou.