Unrealistic, but good

The quote for this chapter is from the song "Tears of Pearls" by Savage Garden.

Its a great plot and I am loving your Harry! However I do have a small quibble...it cant be that hard to google the correct spelling to great artists like Van Gogh, Rembrandt and the like can it?
Hope you have the chance to beta your story to make it more polished.
Cheers
Roary

haha I loved that last line!
That was an enjoyable story, I liked the characters you made, but the only thing I didn't like was Harry being in Ravenclaw. But it was still a great read. And he's a faerie!?! I LOVE it!

I LOVE BRIAN FRAUD! yay!

also love the story!

YAY the Buffy/Angle reference made my day! so kudos- also liked the LOtR reference but idk if that was intentional... love the story so far, very good!

That's...** up

I love you. Please continue this story, it's just to kick-** to end.

Wesley (Wyndham-) PRYCE, huh? Yeah, he definintely would have been a Ravenclaw at first, but then his Gryffindor side took over and everything went to Hell.

Very interesting chapter, though now it feels like a crossover. *resists the urge to trill*

Dude, I haven't read your material in a very, very long time. Simply stated, you need a beta. Even more simply stated, this was the most enjoyable chapter yet. Bravo.

I have big problems with Ron after the third book so I'm not even sure I'm comfortable with him right now, but Riley is an awesome original character and kudos to you for creating her.

Your simplifications of the Houses and their personality makeups can be put down to Riley's own personality, so I'll let that go, but the banter when Harry and Riley meet Ron more than makes up for the flaws.

I'm personally rooting for Slytherin! or Hufflepuff!Harry, but I'll just have to see what happens. I have a hunch, but...

Ha, I like the story so far, and I found it amusing that I am a fan of all of the things to be warned about. Well, I'm not for violence in real life, but in fanfiction? Hey, you've got to satisfy the bloodthirsty side of human nature somehow.

oops! I loved that ending! Harry just showed his guns to his friends and then says oops...
is kevin a vampire? Great story! Thanks for sharing!

Harry is quite cute in your story. I'm excited to read the part when he gets stronger!

LOL! That's perfect - Draco being called Milky.

I like the concept but he just sees the baby and decides 'hey, IM gong to make him my heir' I havnt read much but shouldnt Harry have slowly grown on him or something. Ah well I still have to read more.