 Leeyiankun 2004-04-29 . chapter 3 No offense, you know.
But...
This is one of the 10th most screw up concept ever concieved! right up there with Kuno as a Wu & Akane as a Sanjiyan!
If you want to infuse a guy with superpowers, pick a saner ppl. Like... Hiroshi or Daisuke!
Heck even Gosunkugi is a better choice! (Though not by much)
Next you'll be telling me that Ryouga's got a hold of the Green lantern's ring And that Akane is actually holding Thor's hammer all the time.
Not that you grammar is bad, just that the concept is screaming OOC all over.
Kuno as an overall justice figure is as believable as Happi the Priest concept. That's my final word on this.
My vote is to scrap this and start over with a more saner character. Take your time, there are pleny of Nuts out there that's suitable for the fusion. >_^ |
 Alex Ultra 2003-11-28 . chapter 2Honestly, although I don't like the idea of having or getting power one didn't work for, this story does have a good feel to it.
Continue it, and show us why you started it. (O.o Whatever that's supposed to mean...)
Alex: Hehe, I KNOW he wouldn't stand a chance against me!! HAHA!!
Alex Ultra: Alex, no one stands a chance against you... so just shut up.
Alex: But I wanna gloat!
Alex Ultra: Not now, I have a headache...
Alex: [Sulks]
LATER |