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| Dark-Sylph 2005-03-08 ch 1,  | abuseYUCK |
| Eitha 2004-08-21 ch 1, | abusewhat happened to the other chapter? i'v read this before but there was another chapter P.S. i am very sorry about Hana, i told her to read this and... well, i think she is brain damaged x |
| Hana 2004-05-14 ch 2, anon. | abusehi, that was a bit scary! what is the idea with the choco syrup??!!? hay u no what i kinda liked it, a bit wrong but sweet all the same! lota luv Me! |
| Rabbit 2004-05-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseman that was hot! please write anothe chapt soon! Rabbit=^.^= |
| Cherry Mars 2004-04-03 ch 2, | abuseVery interesting. Are you banned yet? This screams lemon. Is there anything worse going through your mind? I liked your Chocolate Syrup picture. Update! |
| lomeloke 2004-01-18 ch 2, | abuseNag, Nag, Nag. Now I am irate. My plans for the elf and the produce isle seem to be for naught. I will not dispair! I will just begin to replace My name when ever I see "oh what is her name". Actually, this make the whole story so much better writen, I am at a loss for describing the mere perfection of your narrative style. Such growth, such expression, superb! Mayhaps, my new plan will encourage more writing. This is just too hot to think of ending. |
| lomeloke 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abuseImplied actions my foot! Breakfast has never seemed so yummy! Poor Marian, if she does not get a decent workout soon, her elf will be so much easier to be led astray. I mean, elven innocence at the grocery store, chocolate syrup (which by the way a 22 oz bottle has 1950 calories- I went to the fridge and did the math), and simple elven curiosity (Come her little boy and look what is on the produce isle). Yes, Yes, send the Silvan Prince out to the Market moreoften. Ma Ha Ha, I am getting a plan... I will wait until Marian goes to work and steal all the chocolate...This will mean that Legolas must again go to the market... Soon Legolas will be seeing more than just my produce... |
| Esme Donna 2004-01-17 ch 2, anon. | abuse*Sigh* so sweet!! I want a Legolas of my own too!! :P:P Why can't I have my own Legolas?!?! hehehe... really great story!! I hope you update soon!! Really enjoy all of your writing. I can feel the words come alive! That's what I love about your stories! Ok well, bye. |
| Marian-W 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI have to say, that re-reading this has made me want to write more of your ficlet! It is just so damned good! Mari |
| Ithilin Palandiriel 2003-12-16 ch 2, | abuseGive me Legolas and a bottle of chocolate syrup any day. That will go at the top of my Christmas list. |
| QM 2003-12-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseAH loss- what happened to FicForum. i've ried all of my computers and even my firneds and NONE of them can get into it. the site wih the stories is there, bu he board isn't!! |
| Queen Arwen Evenstar 2003-12-09 ch 2, | abuseOh. My. God. This story is so good! I so agree with mookitty, you get a real guilty pleasure out of it! |
| mookitty 2003-12-09 ch 2, | abuseLoss, you can write stories like this any day, any time and I will read them! I think I need a cold shower after this one! ;o) Cheers! ~mookitty |
| mookitty 2003-12-09 ch 1, | abuseLoss, just like chocolate, this story is SUCH a guilty pleasure! Want more! More chocolate-covered Legolas, puh-lease! Yum! ;o) Cheers! ~mookitty |
| The Hobbit Ivy 2003-12-08 ch 2, | abuseI would have reviewed last night, but FFnet wouldn't let me... *sigh* Loved the chapter! The syrup thing is just hilarious! With a story behind this, it would have a VERY interesting plot! update soon, PLEASE! -The Hobbit Ivy |