I really liked it. I find Tomo to be one of the more interesting FY characters and you made me see him in a different light.

*much applauding* very very good! Much of what Tomo-sama must think...poor Tomo-sama...*sniff* *hugs him* *is thrown into illusion*...uh oh...

WAH!My poor tomo-kun! *huggles tomo who valiently struggles to get away* WAH!Write more, pwease? jah ne! leah.

i love this story but where's the rest? how come there's no more? or did u write more and its not on fanfiction.com? um...if u did write more please send it to me

poor tomo! i am a sucker for tomo, and this was good.

so short and sweet! ne ways why did u put it as under Tomo, why not Suboshi coz its his viewpoint? i loved this note, but why would tomo leave open his diary entry, um i think it is his diary righto? its so personal.

*sniffles*
Poor Tomo...and Suboshi being the one to read all of that.