A great story. Very well written.

I love it but it needs a squel. How about where they discover Gandalf survives and tease Glorfindel for not being unique any more?

Some nice conversation between the two characters. And you handled the Balrog and Glorfindel with great sympathy.

very good..as waters angel says..of course..is elrond's son elrond too? i don't think that elves talk that way..but i only read the first book so who knows?

This is nice..but Elrond in half-moon spectacles?

I like ur story. _

This is so good Fire Pendant! Thanks for the definitions at the end _, it really helps those of us who have no clue how to speak, let alone read elvish. You should write more LOTR by itself.
Bye.