Very Good,Keep it going. Send Part 3 soon Please!
Now on to Part 2's reading.

Interesting... I never thought of Rachel being so forward, let alone like *that*. I'm glad this wasn't overdone. Good job.

It was good, unexpected yet at the same time the one thing I've been waiting to read. Can't wait for the next part as I'd like to see what happens next, keep up the good work. As once said in the Casa Blanca movie, only slightly re-worded, "This looks like the start of a good Max Steel series."

Okay, I have nothing against the Max/Rachel relationship, but that was kinda pushing it. Okay, maybe it's my veiws on the two of them, but..oh dear. Also, I didn't think the uniforms were zippered in the front. More disturbingly, this isn't that hard of a sceneario to imagine. I wasn't expecting an NC-17 in this section for a while. Very nice story, all the same, I can't wait to read the rest.