Wow, this is great! The story is sweet and touching; it also fits the 'New Frontier' series well. Keep writing!

Are you sure you aren't Peter David? :) I loved this! It reads like an excerpt (sp?) from one of the books. It was so good it made me cry! :( Write more stories please! :)

this was quite good, thank you. mew frontier is one of my favorite series, and it was nice to be able to read a fic while waiting for more books to be published. (it takes too darn long!)

Good story man, it was nice to see some New Frontier stuff around here.

wonderful, it almost made me cry. but shouldn't McHenry have come to her rescue in sickbay. i'm still a little confused about him.