rotflmfao! that was so funny! insane, but funny! which is why i liked it! ^_^

Hey, I remember you guys! I actually find your style to be fun and refreshing.

(Sweat-drop) Love your pen-name though, I for one watch Red Dwarf too.

HA, you cant run!, ive finaly found your pen name.
BWA ha ha har
oh, well, love your usual unfunny joke (just kidding) oh, and bec is evil. EVIL i tell you.
(I think its a little sister thing!)
Smiles all roung
Da ham

Hey Luke great story. A few questions before i leave for school. Is Luke your real name? Where do you come from?(Im from australia) How old are you?

Rowan

Interesting. I like it quite a lot. What are you going to do to Leo? (Poor Leo. Not.) And are you going to do anything with Casey and April?
BTW, I am so pleased to see that you are able to spell, and know about basic grammar. It drives me nuts when authors don't know and can't be bothered to ask for a beta reader.
Here's hoping you'll update soon!

I think it's a funny story. Donatello being drunk was a real shock to me,lol! Update soon!

oh god Raph a human hunter this is damn funny...in a sick way. HAHAHAHA reminds me of Freddy Kruger I don't know why

Far be it from me to flame anyone who insults the 'honor' of the Ninja Turtles, since I do it so regularly, but I'm going to have to.
If you were going to reveal the deepest, darkest secrets of the Ninja Turtles, couldn't you at least have been a little more original about it?
Everybody knows Raphael is a jerk who enjoys fighting too much. His status in this fic as a Hannibal Lecter wannabe is hardly a stretch given his personality.
Then there's Don, the computer geek. And, like every stereotypical computer geek in every fic like this, he's a ** addict. Why not make him an evil hacker, just for some originality? Anybody can do a 'computer pervert' story. I'll say, though, that making him an alcoholic was rather original. I haven't seen that before.
Lastly, there's Mikey the Pot Head. Wow, big stretch of the imagination there. The way he talks, the way he acts suggests the animators forgot the cloud of marijuana smoke hovering around him like Pigpen's dust aura. Come on, use that imagination.
Leo...well, Leo's untouched as of yet. Try avoiding the stereotypical Leo psychoses--that he's a control freak, that he does other things when he claims to be meditating, etc.
I'll give you this, though, so I don't sound like a total **. It's a well-written fic and kind of amusing and interesting at times. Unfortunately, it's predictable and not very original, aside from you going to visit the Turtles.
~Caboose

hey, I'm liking the story, but if you like your story I think you need to put it in R. I don't know, but I'm not sure that Fanfiction people will appreciate this here, even though thirteen years olds see worse than this on public TV. I just wanted to give you all heads up so it don't get taken down.
Also, R people will probebly appreciate the story more.
As for Leo...well, the thing with him is he's perfect. A little too perfect. Got to be something you all could do with that. Um, (looks around nervously for Leo fans and whispers): maybe you could bring down Leo and Splinter together, like um...how do I put this...maybe there's something unholy about...oh geez, I said too much already. I'm sure you all will figure it out.

Intersting a few typos but heck I do those as well.Really intersting and origonal.Keep it going.

Very original and intriguing so far. Interested in seeing what you two have in store for us readers. I have only one complaint... you reminded me of the horrific outcome of the Rugby World Cup, losing by one kick! Argh!
Update soon.

No, its not bad...
Much as Luke doesn't know what to say to Raph, I just don't know what to say to you two.
Its certainly the most interesting author insertion fic I have ever read. I am glad someone finally did something besides have sleep overs with the turltes (no offense, guys, I just like coming across something original).
Shouldn't this maybe be in the R section though? I don't know how graphic you all are planning to get.
Red Turtle

ROCK ON SMEG AND COKE N' PIE!
TWAS VERY GOD.
HEY LOOK... A SKULL... YOU'R SKULL.
BWA HA HA HA
OK, I'LL GET OVER IT. KEEP UP YHE GOOD WORK GUYS !