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Reviews for: Do You Want Fries With That?
Shark8 9/7/04 . chapter 1
Nice! I especially loved the "What self-respecting villan would live with his mom?"
Paige Dayspring 11/2/03 . chapter 1
cute
The Awful Truth 7/20/02 . chapter 1
Yeah, it's tough being a supervillain. We- oh, damn, ignore that.

Well, great conversation story! I love these things, because besides what the characters in question are saying, everything is up to your imagination. Which, considering the fanfic crowd, means that many readers may be sorely lacking when they read this, but I'm here to applaud you, not detract from others like I usually do. THE AWFUL TRUTH is that this is a fun little story.

...gah. I'm better at insults.
Chris Oakley 5/15/01 . chapter 1
A RIOT! :) I think you've got a future on the comedy circuit.
Jacob M. Bosch 5/12/01 . chapter 1
Funny story with just the right pitch.
FortressMaximus 4/29/01 . chapter 1
I..I don't know what to say. I'm still laughing my @$$ off! Very nice!

But do they pull it off! Inquiring readers wanna know!
Chaya 4/25/01 . chapter 1
How very, very odd. *snicker*...
jocante 2/21/01 . chapter 1
Excellent! Somehow I can just picture two guys in funny suits eating burgers in a Hardee's.- T. Masterson
Cyrus 1/27/01 . chapter 1
Great story, it was like Seinfeld...but with bad guys! Really cool, this is definetly worth reading, I loved it! It gave me such a great idea for a new story...
Sholio 1/14/01 . chapter 1
Funny! I love the idea of a supervillian getting evicted...
Aren Riszk 11/28/00 . chapter 1
Heh heh heh... I like it. Funny stuff.
Jessie4 11/26/00 . chapter 1
Great sense of humour about this piece! _ I loved the refrences to the more obscure DC villains.. GReat work here!
Sandy 7/17/00 . chapter 1
LOL Great dialogue; reminds me of JLA back when it was still fun to read...
C.F.P 6/28/00 . chapter 1
Childish & silly without being actually funny.
Digital Construct 6/6/00 . chapter 1
Oh, this is good. This is funny. I like this. Simple review, for a simple (but good) story.
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