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| Tweedle-dee 2005-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseOmg! that was so god! omg i literally crying right now! Aw that was so beautiful...*sighs lol Great fic! |
| bristow123 2004-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseJinnie, This, I loved. Simply loved. It's what we should have seen, more than just a brief scene of a devastated Vaughn. Vaughn and Dixon grieving for Sydney. Nice use of repitive storytelling - the *was*, not is. Thanks for writing it! |
| xanya-forever 2004-04-04 ch 1,  | abuseArgh, now I'm about to cry... still, that is a sign of good writing if ever I saw one. This scene in The Two just broke my heart so much (well, obviously not this scene, but the one where we see Vaughn crying) and this was the perfect accompaniment. You did it from Dixon's point of view really well, and his love for Sydney was definitely evident. As was Vaughn's, sob sob. Hmm, I think I need a tissue. Anyway, another fantastic piece from you - WELL DONE! |
| shdwcat27 2004-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow,that is very powerful writing. I'm in tears. |
| Kristin W 2004-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is the second one of your fics that I've read, and you are incredible! This one brought tears to my eyes. You have such a great feeling for the characters- very well written and completely absorbing. |
| UndercoverElfHM 2003-12-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was heart breakingly sad, good job. I appreciated getting Dixon's view of Sydney's death, especially the part where he says he loved her like his own. :'( "And then he stops, eyes fixed on nothing. Only then do I remember how young he is. Was, not is. Was." My favorite section, I think. I like how you tied in the use of "Was, not is. Was." here. |
| mallory 2003-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseon the brink on tears! |
| Terin 2003-12-11 ch 1, | abuseohh this is very good. |
| LilyoftheValley4 2003-11-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was great. It's a nice change to hear the events of Sydney's death from a view other than Vaughn. I loved it! |
| AngelWings8 2003-11-29 ch 1, | abuseLovely! I always enjoy your fics. Wonderful job on this one. I love seeing things from Dixon's pov for a change. |
| kay10197 2003-11-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was wonderful!:) |
| chang-raeleeismyhero 2003-11-29 ch 1, | abuse*sob* So sad... I love that it was from Dixon's POV. Very introspective. Very well done. Nadja |
| Carys5 2003-11-29 ch 1, | abuseI have never seen anything like this. You wrote it so fabulously. Truly a unique perspective that seems true to the characters we know and love. Well Done! |
| Ivy 2003-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery heavy and sad, I can just imagine thiss scene taking place in the show. |
| Ralphe 2003-11-28 ch 1, | abuseVery fine writing. Very sad piece. I like it a lot. |