Are you going to write another chapter? because this is good!

Aww, very cute:) I think you really captured Daniel well. I liked the little addition of him being jealous, even of Teal'c. Now there's a funny picture. Good job.

What a great story! Thanks for such a wonderful read, I simply adore the S/D pairing - they're such a great fit :)

oaky way cute! good job

It made me laugh and go "aw"! Great fic! Write more!
Lady Pyra

Wow, this was so well done. A lot of emotion in the dialogue between Daniel and Sam. Great job with the characterization and description. I enjoyed this story very much and I'm wondering if you will add another chapter. Would love to read more of this!
Gatergirl :-)